Spellblade

Name: Spellblade
Type: Non-elemental
Usage: Conjuration
Description: A powerful form of magic hunted to near extinction due to it's abnormal capabilities. Originally known as Paragons they were an order dedicated and taught how to specifically combat mages. During the initial rise of mages in Fiore and the many who would abuse the gift it seemed reasonable to form such an order. They were charged with hunting those who would abuse magic in any way and was even known for crossing paths with powerful demons and the like. After a world shattering incident in which one of their most esteemed leaders managed to actually kill a god, encouraging what would take out more than 95% of the order. Ethan was taught the art by a lone Paragon who had taken residence in a smaller city in the mountains, making a living out of exorcising nasty earth spirits and had even taken a few apprentices in the city to keep the trade alive. Ethan being one of them, after a certain incident in which his master passed away he and his fellow apprentices spread with the winds to perfect the art in their own way.

A typical mage manipulates energy and forces change within it to produce results. Spellblades do the exact opposite to fight magic. They're especially trained so that their magic "stabilizes" or "pacifies" magic in general. Some Spellblades have even been known to be able to seal beings of magical origin in various ways. The user constantly projects a blue aura while in use and is resistant to magic of all kinds. They're able to freely manipulate their aura and have it solidify as a form of defense while it can also be hardened to enchance and increase the range of physical attacks. The aura's most notable trait however is how it weakens and eventually have magic dissipate at contact. One of their most notable abilities which gave them their specific name though is that to let their aura take on the properties of anothers magic, encoating their blade and aura in whatever element's available as long as it's of magical origin. While quite effective against mages and magical beings in general the user doesn't have an actual edge against beings of a non-magical nature; such as the people of the Isles, Ninja Town or even just common animals. Though the aura's protective abilities remain useful in such situations.

Abilities:

D-rank Spells:

You cannot make your magic, until you have selected an origin.

Hai~

Admin-in-training so please bear with me =w=

All edits will be in this color :3 <3

Pride wrote:Name: Spellblade
Type: Non-elemental
Usage: Conjuration
Description: A powerful form of magic hunted to near extinction due to it's abnormal capabilities. Originally known as Paragons they were an order dedicated and taught how to specifically combat mages. During the initial rise of mages in Fiore and the many who would abuse the gift it seemed reasonable to form such an order. They were charged with hunting those who would abuse magic in any way and was even known for crossing paths with powerful demons and the like. After a world shattering incident in which one of their most esteemed leaders managed to actually kill a god, encouraging what would take out more than 95% of the order. Ethan was taught the art by a lone Paragon who had taken residence in a smaller city in the mountains, making a living out of exorcising nasty earth spirits and had even taken a few apprentices in the city to keep the trade alive. Ethan being one of them, after a certain incident in which his master passed away he and his fellow apprentices spread with the winds to perfect the art in their own way.

A typical mage manipulates energy and forces change within it to produce results. Spellblades do the exact opposite to fight magic. They're especially trained so that their magic "stabilizes" or "pacifies" magic in general. Some Spellblades have even been known to be able to seal beings of magical origin in various ways. The user constantly projects a blue aura while in use and is resistant to magic of all kinds. They're able to freely manipulate their aura and have it solidify as a form of defense while it can also be hardened to enchance and increase the range of physical attacks. The aura's most notable trait however is how it weakens and eventually have magic dissipate at contact. One of their most notable abilities which gave them their specific name though is that to let their aura take on the properties of anothers magic, encoating their blade and aura in whatever element's available as long as it's of magical origin. While quite effective against mages and magical beings in general the user doesn't have an actual edge against beings of a non-magical nature; such as the people of the Isles, Ninja Town or even just common animals. Though the aura's protective abilities remain useful in such situations.

Abilities:

D-rank Spells:

Please bump when finished <3

Bump

Pride wrote:Name: Spellblade
Type: Non-elemental
Usage: Conjuration
Description: A powerful form of magic hunted to near extinction due to it's abnormal capabilities. Originally known as Paragons they were an order dedicated and taught how to specifically combat mages. During the initial rise of mages in Fiore and the many who would abuse the gift it seemed reasonable to form such an order. They were charged with hunting those who would abuse magic in any way and was even known for crossing paths with powerful demons and the like. After a world shattering incident in which one of their most esteemed leaders managed to actually kill a god, encouraging what would take out more than 95% of the order. Ethan was taught the art by a lone Paragon who had taken residence in a smaller city in the mountains, making a living out of exorcising nasty earth spirits and had even taken a few apprentices in the city to keep the trade alive. Ethan being one of them, after a certain incident in which his master passed away he and his fellow apprentices spread with the winds to perfect the art in their own way.

A typical mage manipulates energy and forces change within it to produce results. Spellblades do the exact opposite to fight magic. They're especially trained so that their magic "stabilizes" or "pacifies" magic in general. Some Spellblades have even been known to be able to seal beings of magical origin in various ways. The user constantly projects a blue aura while in use and is resistant to magic of all kinds. They're able to freely manipulate their aura and have it solidify as a form of defense while it can also be hardened to enchance and increase the range of physical attacks. The aura's most notable trait however is how it weakens and eventually have magic dissipate at contact. One of their most notable abilities which gave them their specific name though is that to let their aura take on the properties of anothers magic, encoating their blade and aura in whatever element's available as long as it's of magical origin. While quite effective against mages and magical beings in general the user doesn't have an actual edge against beings of a non-magical nature; such as the people of the Isles, Ninja Town or even just common animals. Though the aura's protective abilities remain useful in such situations.

Abilities:

D-rank Spells:

There. Sorry it took so long. ^^; Hm... I'll have Kaseki take over and make changes and stuff cause I'm not allowed to approve lol.

I declare Bump

I want you to realize your abilities, is really just 6 different things stcked up.

Forcefields: You have a "Self" shield, and "Target" based one, as well as turnng it physical which means you can get position of advantage fast.

as for your second ability, you have something that steals element, and gets an additional resistance... which is rather insane when combined with first ability... on top of that, typical range for a D-ranked spell is 10m. http://www.unknownlandsrp.com/t358-application-guidelines-wip#1483 And you have a spell that turns a weapon into some super antimagic thing.

And I'm sure you'll get the term I'm going to use right now..

but this is very Kiba.

So either nerf your other abilities, as your passive resistance to EVERYTHING is already a massive stretch (As people have the exact same numbers for just ONE ELEMENT.) and you have a magic that can stack... so change that up, or rank up and do this again when you're D-Class.

As it stands, you have some A-ranked abilities with a B-ranked ranged spell, with only C-ranked limitations.

There, nerfed

The user due to his magic revolved around the concept of fighting magic renders the user particularily resistant towards magic in all it's forms depending on his rank. While it renders him resistant to all elements in magical form he has no resistances against the element in their natural form which also includes jutsus as they're not magical despite appearances.

So either I'm reading this wrong.. or your counting Jutsu as magic?
Also, it looks like http://www.unknownlandsrp.com/t303-strength-of-the-mountain in terms of the resistance, So i'm not quite sure what you want with this.

Pride can manifest his aura into force fields which is so far only capable of being rised around oneself. Will dissipate on contact with a C-ranked Non-magical attack or a B-ranked magical attack.

Would make a great lineage, but not a F-Ranked ability for a F-Class mage. So I suggest a chart, or you have some way to tie this in with your current Class/Rank/Level

The trademark ability of the Spellblades; while not perfected just yet it's used to divert another magical beings energy into oneself and apply the element of the spell which was absorbed. As a result the users aura will drastically change in nature and all attacks made will do an additional damage of the absorbed element equal to the user's rank.
Duration: 3 posts / Cooldown: 4 Posts
If aborting an element before the duration ends the cooldown shortens with Number of posts active + 1 / Ex. Activated for 2 posts = 3 posts cooldown

Either I'm not getting this because it makes no sense, or because I just woke up. (Probably because I just woke up) But it looks like your coping Magical Element, and diverting it into your own spells? Yes? If so, this doesn't get you ANOTHER damage boost on your spell. Why? Because with all your abilities and spell. you can stack x3 damage at x1 cost, with a 200% Resistance when you use your shields and magic resistance... which is cool, but has to be limited. So if you wanna copy element from the last magical attack that hit you, or that came in contact with and make your next attack that element... OR EVEN TURN YOUR RESISTANCE TO MAGIC TO JUST THAT MAGIC... By all means do it.

Like all good magics, they start off insanely powerful, without tying in your current power level. So it's going to be limited, as all F-Class things are, as this has the most passives out of them all. And as your rank up, maybe around C-B class, you'll be around where you can really have some great fun with this magic.

There! Made changes accordingly and ditched the Force Field until I rank up a little

Eh, looks okay to me.... at least for now..

Approved.