by Both are abilities, fix this. Also capitalize.Noire wrote:Name: Monado one
Owner: Noire
Type: Weapon
Rank: Weak
Description:Length: one meter
- Monado one:
Weight: ten kilograms
Strengths:
-the monado appearance can change if the wielders will commands it to.
- it deals double damage to all machine based opponents.
Weaknesses:
-the monado deals half damage to all human opponents.
-the monado limits the wielders ability to move around, making the wielder go at half speed.
-the monado must be wielded with two hands, limiting the defense of the wielder.
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Andr01d
Lineage : Demon of Time
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 864
Sacred Shards : 14
Class : S
Level : 76
Experience : 118440
Character Sheet
Character Name: Aknaid
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Primary Magic: Art of Mummification
Noire
Lineage : Gunslinger's Quickdraw
Position : None
Origin : Toonville
Posts : 230
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : D
Level : 1
Experience : 130
I hope that is OK.
Andr01d-
Lineage : Demon of Time
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 864
Sacred Shards : 14
Class : S
Level : 76
Experience : 118440
Character Sheet
Character Name: Aknaid
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Primary Magic: Art of Mummification
The blue is iffy, making it a borderline ability. But seeing as it has massive backdraws, sure, whatever. Just fix the spacing and capitalization and I'll approve this.Noire wrote:Name: Monado one
Owner: Noire
Type: Weapon
Rank: Weak
Description:Length: one meter
- Monado one:
Weight: ten kilograms
Strengths:
-_The Monado is handled with two hands, maximizing attack power.
- The Monado can only be wielded by Noire and is not able to be picked up by others.
Weaknesses:
-_The Monado deals half damage to all human opponents.
-_The Monado limits the wielders ability to move around, making the wielder go at half speed.
-_The Monado must be wielded with two hands, limiting the defense of the wielder.
Noire-
Lineage : Gunslinger's Quickdraw
Position : None
Origin : Toonville
Posts : 230
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : D
Level : 1
Experience : 130
i am grateful for your assistance
Noire-
Lineage : Gunslinger's Quickdraw
Position : None
Origin : Toonville
Posts : 230
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : D
Level : 1
Experience : 130
i hope it can get reviewed and approved. bumping
Andr01d-
Lineage : Demon of Time
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 864
Sacred Shards : 14
Class : S
Level : 76
Experience : 118440
Character Sheet
Character Name: Aknaid
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Primary Magic: Art of Mummification
Specify that the weapon deals 1/2D ranked damage, and it should be good to go.
Noire-
Lineage : Gunslinger's Quickdraw
Position : None
Origin : Toonville
Posts : 230
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : D
Level : 1
Experience : 130
done and done. i hope this is all right. i appreciate all the help given.
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