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TechNolajG
Lineage : Bloodmage's Burden
Position : None
Origin : Urban City
Posts : 11
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : F
Level : 1
Experience : 0
Andr01d
Lineage : Demon of Time
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 864
Sacred Shards : 14
Class : S
Level : 76
Experience : 118440
Character Sheet
Character Name: Aknaid
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Primary Magic: Art of Mummification
TechNolajG wrote:Name: Jabriel Galon
Nickname: J.G.
Gender: Male
Race: Lorien
Age: Eight
Birthday: December, Eigth Eight*
Sexuality: Straight
Unique Characteristics:
To further emphasize his personality, Jabriel is regularly seen with a calm or laid back expression. He has long dreadlocks that reaches halfway down his back. His hair is jet black with a barely noticeable dark blue tint at the very tips. Jabriel has brown skin. The feeling of his skin is as smooth as a baby’s bottom. His body temperature always seems to be warm, regardless of the weather.
There aren’t any blemishes on his skin. The color of his eyes are dark brown, his eyes are normally low as if he were sedated and sleepy. He has a figure that is just a little slimmer than average. It is actually hard for him to gain weight, due to his high metabolism. Though, this still doesn’t stop him from working out. Even with a slightly below average shape, he packs muscle and some strength. It’s just not normal for one to correctly gauge his strength by his appearance. Explain what a "Lorien" is
I won't even touch the personality. Just know that your "Intelligence", "Perception", and "Adaptation" will always be "slower" and "not as good" as people who are both a higher Level and Class. As far as strength, you could say you're a body builder, and even so...TechNolajG wrote:Dislikes:
- Arrogance & Stubborness Stubbornness*
- Being decieved, betrayal, laziness, recklessness deceived*
- Low self-esteem, Quitters
Level 1 < Level 2
Always.
TechNolajG-
Lineage : Bloodmage's Burden
Position : None
Origin : Urban City
Posts : 11
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : F
Level : 1
Experience : 0
Thanks for alerting me of the typos, I've corrected what you've pointed out.
Is there something wrong with the personality? If so, I can take out some of the detail. Also, I was under the impression that my rpc's personality was how I conduct my character. Of course I'm not going to abuse the leveling and class differences, I was just being detailed in my personality. As far as strength, I was basically saying even though my character is skinny (slim), he isn't weak.
Thanks for your assistance and let me know what's next please (I'm a newbie).
Andr01d wrote:I won't even touch the personality. Just know that your "Intelligence", "Perception", and "Adaptation" will always be "slower" and "not as good" as people who are both a higher Level and Class. As far as strength, you could say you're a body builder, and even so...
Always.
Is there something wrong with the personality? If so, I can take out some of the detail. Also, I was under the impression that my rpc's personality was how I conduct my character. Of course I'm not going to abuse the leveling and class differences, I was just being detailed in my personality. As far as strength, I was basically saying even though my character is skinny (slim), he isn't weak.
Thanks for your assistance and let me know what's next please (I'm a newbie).
Andr01d-
Lineage : Demon of Time
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 864
Sacred Shards : 14
Class : S
Level : 76
Experience : 118440
Character Sheet
Character Name: Aknaid
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Primary Magic: Art of Mummification
In physical appearance a lorien closely resembles a human, however in the spiritual realm they take up a more fearsome form. The only difference would be a colored tribal marking around their eye, but this alone isn’t enough to accurately distinguish a Lorien from a human. They possess unique gi abilities, composed of multiple elements.
The above goes in unique characteristics.
And normally people type 300-600 for the personality. You have 1211. So yes, I have to say what was said for our records, for the vent you godmod, or attempt to make up powers you don't have, like Suu.
TechNolajG-
Lineage : Bloodmage's Burden
Position : None
Origin : Urban City
Posts : 11
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : F
Level : 1
Experience : 0
Ohh okay that's smart. Thanks for explaining because I was really confused at why you had said that. Um... Where exactly do I include said "powers?" And should I get to it now, do I wait until after this is approved, or is there something else?
Andr01d-
Lineage : Demon of Time
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 864
Sacred Shards : 14
Class : S
Level : 76
Experience : 118440
Character Sheet
Character Name: Aknaid
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Primary Magic: Art of Mummification
http://www.unknownlandsrp.com/f26-wip-magiconly difference would be a colored tribal marking around their eye, but this alone isn’t enough to accurately distinguish a Lorien from a human. They possess unique gi abilities, composed of multiple elements.
Before I even try to figure out what you're doing...
Your species sounds like nothing different than humans, other than how you appear spiritually... Am I correct?
And everyone gets 4 element slots, so if you're trying to get EXTRA ones, that's not gonna happen.
TechNolajG-
Lineage : Bloodmage's Burden
Position : None
Origin : Urban City
Posts : 11
Sacred Shards : 0
Class : F
Level : 1
Experience : 0
That is correct, other than the tribal marking and their spiritual makeup. Also, "possess unique Gi" part is just to let it known that they are born with special gi (chi, ki, magic energy, or whatever appropriate term for energy there is). The "multiple elements" part expresses that the elementals or effects may differ from Lorien to Lorien. The four slots sounds perfect.
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