Samedi Weapon 3

by **Samedi** Thu Aug 13, 2015 2:32 pm

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Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Samedi Thu Aug 13, 2015 2:32 pm

Name: Pointy Staff
Owner: Akuma Swordborn
Type: Lance
Rank: Weak
Description: A long lance to attack with
Samedi Weapon 3 3rdGen-Lance_Equipment_Render_001

Samedi Weapon 3 3rdGen-Lance_Equipment_Render_001

Length: 7ft
Weight: 20lbs
Strengths:
- It's made of Carbon and titanium, so it is strong
- It has a long reach
Weaknesses:
- It can break from Strong hits and C Rank dmg
- Anyone can use it
- Hard to hide
Ability: No

Last edited by Samedi on Fri Aug 14, 2015 10:36 am; edited 2 times in total

by **Lilinette Q. Mido** Thu Aug 13, 2015 9:58 pm

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Post n°2

Re: Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Aug 13, 2015 9:58 pm

Comments in pink as always <3

Samedi wrote:Name: Pointy Staff
Type: weapon (No, its a lance.)
Rank: waek (Weak*)
Description: A long lance to attack with
Length: 7ft
Weight: 20lbs (i guess its pretty thick to weigh 20 pounds.)
Strengths:
- It's made of Carbon and titanium (Explain in the application how this is a strength.)
- It has a long reach
Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths) (Delete this)
- It can break (explain its durability please)
- Anyone can use it
- Hard to hide
Ability: No (Well said)

by **Samedi** Thu Aug 13, 2015 11:07 pm

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Re: Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Samedi Thu Aug 13, 2015 11:07 pm

Bump

by **Lilinette Q. Mido** Fri Aug 14, 2015 7:02 am

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Re: Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Fri Aug 14, 2015 7:02 am

Delete what is in red.

Samedi wrote:Name: Pointy Staff
Type: Lance
Rank: Weak*
Description: A long lance to attack with

Length: 7ft
Weight: 20lbs
Strengths:
- It's made of Carbon and titanium, so it is strong
- It has a long reach
Weaknesses: (
- It can break from Strong hits and C Rank dmg
- Anyone can use it
- Hard to hide
Ability: No

by **Samedi** Fri Aug 14, 2015 10:36 am

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Re: Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Samedi Fri Aug 14, 2015 10:36 am

Bamp.

by **Lilinette Q. Mido** Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:31 pm

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Re: Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:31 pm

by **Shini Chikai** Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:40 pm

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Re: Samedi Weapon 3

Post by Shini Chikai Fri Aug 14, 2015 5:40 pm

Samedi wrote:Name: Pointy Staff
Type: Lance
Rank: Weak
Description: A long lance to attack with

Length: 7ft
Weight: 20lbs
Strengths:
- It's made of Carbon and titanium, so it is strong
- It has a long reach
Weaknesses:
- It can break from Strong hits and C Rank dmg
- Anyone can use it
- Hard to hide
Ability: No

Blue : This is absurd, and could be used to make some OP af weapon, using two of the arguably strongest metals... that are real. But eh. As long as the HP was stated. Pass.
Green : How many strong hits? Why isn't damage spelled out? While these are small things, they will add up over time, and if you begin to slack, eventually you will find that you're the mod who does a shitty job. But it's a small mistake. Still... Pass
Orange : N/A* ... Eh... Barely Pass