Item Grade 2 [NaiNai]

by **Kasey** Thu Oct 15, 2015 3:07 pm

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Post n°1

Item Grade 2 [NaiNai]

Post by Kasey Thu Oct 15, 2015 3:07 pm

Name: Breastplate
Owner: Kasey
Type: Item
Rank: Weak
Description: A piece of armor worn under clothing. It protects from damage. It fits over her bra and covers her front. It appears nothing more than a simple metal bra worn over the clothing.
=
Weight: 5lbs
Strengths:
- Durability: 10 Weak Hits / 4 D Spell hits
-Protects from damage.
Weaknesses:
- Cannot wear other armor over it
- Cannot be easily removed
- Must enter threads with it on
Ability: No ability

Last edited by Kasey on Sat Oct 31, 2015 10:49 am; edited 5 times in total

by Guest Sat Oct 31, 2015 11:57 am

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Post n°2

Re: Item Grade 2 [NaiNai]

Post by Guest Sat Oct 31, 2015 11:57 am

Approved.

by **Kaseki** Sat Oct 31, 2015 12:14 pm

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Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
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Post n°3

Re: Item Grade 2 [NaiNai]

Post by Kaseki Sat Oct 31, 2015 12:14 pm

Kasey wrote:Name: Breastplate
Owner: Kasey
Type: Item Wrong. It should be armor.
Rank: Weak
Description: A piece of armor worn under clothing. It protects from damage. It fits over her bra and covers her front. It appears nothing more than a simple metal bra worn over the clothing.
= Should be removed.
Weight: 5lbs
Strengths:
- Durability: 10 Weak Hits / 4 D Spell hits
-Protects from damage. This is the same as above.
Weaknesses:
- Cannot wear other armor over it
- Cannot be easily removed
- Must enter threads with it on
Ability: No ability Should say "N/A" for uniformity

It's... passable. Let's see how you do on the other apps.