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    Alexei's Magic: God of Chaos

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    Post by Chaostothemax Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:17 pm

    Name: God of Chaos
    Type: Chaos; it’s a combination of light and darkness that creates a bizarre, space-bending magic.
    Usage: Manipulation of light and darkness to create an Entropy effect.
    Description: When Alexei defeated and absorbed Rakoto, the God responsible for giving the young man his God Slayer powers, said powers mutated and became something more. Alexei was almost overwhelmed by them, until the Pantheon appeared and forcibly ascended him to their ranks as the God of Chaos and Freedom, replacing Rakoto. With his ascension, his mutated magics changed to fit his new role in the world; they now represent him as an avatar of Freedom and Chaos, and help him to spread his powers throughout the world.
    Abilities:
    Hedonism: Wherever Alexei goes, those around him become unable to hide their emotions; discontent and other negative emotions bubble to the surface. (Anybody within a 20m radius of Alexei feels their emotions become exacerbated, especially negative ones; has no effect on those who are a higher rank than Alexei.)
    Extremism: As the God of Chaos, Alexei has an upgraded version of his Soul Gaze; he can see into others’ souls to see their balance of good and evil, and can see moments of peoples’ past that define those scales (moments of extreme heroism/villainy). Can only be used on those of equal or lesser rank.

    Anarchism: Alexei’s attacks have a special deconstructive aspect to them that allows them to break down nonorganic material. When attacking a nonliving object (equipment, buildings, weapons, etc.) his attacks deal an extra D-Rank damage.
    Individualism: Alexei’s determination, backed by his power as the God of Freedom, gives him incredible resistance against mental attacks; he has a 25% resistance to illusions and other effects that control or manipulate the mind. In return, however, he has a 25% weakness to combination attacks (defined here as attacks that combine the powers of two or more people).


    ”Spells”:


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    Post by Kaseki Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:20 pm

    Chaostothemax wrote:Name: God of Chaos
    Type: Chaos; it’s a combination of light and darkness that creates a bizarre, space-bending magic.
    Usage: Manipulation of light and darkness to create an Entropy effect.
    Description: When Alexei defeated and absorbed Rakoto, the God responsible for giving the young man his God Slayer powers, said powers mutated and became something more. Alexei was almost overwhelmed by them, until the Pantheon appeared and forcibly ascended him to their ranks as the God of Chaos and Freedom, replacing Rakoto. With his ascension, his mutated magics changed to fit his new role in the world; they now represent him as an avatar of Freedom and Chaos, and help him to spread his powers throughout the world.
    Abilities:
    Hedonism: Wherever Alexei goes, those around him become unable to hide their emotions; discontent and other negative emotions bubble to the surface. (Anybody within a 20m radius of Alexei feels their emotions become exacerbated, especially negative ones; has no effect on those who are a higher rank than Alexei.)
    Extremism: As the God of Chaos, Alexei has an upgraded version of his Soul Gaze; he can see into others’ souls to see their balance of good and evil, and can see moments of peoples’ past that define those scales (moments of extreme heroism/villainy)Effects only equal class and below.
    Anarchism: Alexei’s attacks have a special deconstructive aspect to them that allows them to break down nonorganic material. When attacking a nonliving object (equipment, buildings, weapons, etc.) his attacks deal an extra D-Rank damage.
    Individualism: Alexei’s determination, backed by his power as the God of Freedom, gives him incredible resistance against mental attacks; illusions and other abilities that deceive or control the mind are 75% effective. Resistance... yet you said it's effective?

    ”Spells”:

    I would correct more... But you have ithis "[Size=12]" code all over the place...
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    Post by Chaostothemax Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:22 pm

    Made the edits you suggested, but I'm not seeing any Size=12 tags >.>
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    Post by Kaseki Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:33 pm

    If you're on a CPU.. you can see it. I'm guessing you're on phone or a tablet...

    So I'll have to look at this in depth tomorrow...

    As it's like 20min from the end of my shift~ XD
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    Post by Darkurr Thu Nov 20, 2014 3:36 pm

    For duration.... nothing lasts until it hits something, it's a max. So max, 2 posts, or it hits something.
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 3:38 pm

    fixed that!
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    Post by Darkurr Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:08 pm

    Individualism: Alexei’s determination, backed by his power as the God of Freedom, gives him incredible resistance against mental attacks; he has a 25% resistance to illusions and other effects that control or manipulate the mind.

    You must have an weakness, to balance resistance. You're just C-Class
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:17 pm

    bump
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    Post by Darkurr Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:21 pm

    Name: Concerto
    Rank: D
    Description: Alexei creates objects out of Chaos energy that he can control like puppets on a string. They last for 3 posts, and can travel anywhere within 10 meters of Alexei, but are considered as Weak Weapons that deal physical damage on hit. Up to eight objects can be made, with four created objects equaling the standard mana cost.
    Strengths:
    -They can take any form, so it can be used for anything from making a skeleton key for lockpicking to making an array of lances for combat
    -Making less than four objects reduces the spell’s mana cost proportionately. For example, if the spell normally costs 10% to make four objects, then making one object would only cost 2.5%.
    -The first blow of each object activates Alexei’s Anarchism ability, allowing them to quickly take down equipment and barricades.
    Weaknesses:
    -Being Weak Weapons, they deal little damage and can be broken by as little as a single D-Rank Spell
    -Making more than four objects cost proportionately more; for example, if casting the spell cost 10% mana, then creating 8 objects would take up 20%.
    -They have a strict leash of 10 meters; no part of the objects can reach past that boundary.
    -Alexei has to concentrate to control them; if one can catch him off guard, the objects would become a nonfactor.
    Duration: Three posts.
    Cooldown: Four posts, starting with the dissolution of the objects.

    You need a limit on the objects. This is super broad.
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:26 pm

    ba-dump.
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:10 pm

    Name: Horizon
    Rank: D
    Description: Alexei plants a symbol onto a target by physically touching it, causing entropy and chaos energy to be drawn to it. Deals a D-Rank damage after 3 posts, and causes Alexei’s other attacks to home in on the target.
    Strengths:
    -Makes Alexei’s other spells much more difficult to dodge.
    -Equipment and other nonliving things that are marked take Anarchism damage every post, but do not take the final burst of damage at the end.
    Weaknesses:
    -Requires physical contact to plant the symbol. If Alexei cannot place his hand on it fully, he cannot create the symbol.
    -Since it is delayed damage, it is not very useful when damage is immediately required.
    -It requires Alexei’s other spells in order to reach it’s full potential.
    -Healing spells dispel the stored entropy; if the target is hit with a healing move while the mark is on them, they will not take the damage (spells will continue to home in on them until the three posts are up, however).
    Duration: Lasts three posts, after which the damage will be dealt.
    Cooldown: Three posts, starting when the mark is dispelled/detonates

    So this deals only D-rank damage once?
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:22 pm

    Yes.
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:28 pm

    State that in weaknesses. That it's delayed damage
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:29 pm

    ...I did >.> It's the second one
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:32 pm

    Name: Revoke
    Rank: D
    Description: Alexei uses his power as the God of Freedom to launch chains that rob his opponent of their freedom. If it hits, it prevents the target from moving or casting spells for a post, and deals D rank damage. Has a range of ten meters from Alexei, and a speed of 4 m/s.
    Strengths:
    -If it connects, it completely locks down an opponent’s fighting capabilities for a post
    -If Horizon is on the target, it will track the target until they leave it’s ten meter range
    -Alexei can also hook nonhuman surfaces in order to pull himself to that location; objects that are hit this way take damage from his Anarchism ability.
    Weaknesses:
    -Moves slowly, so it’s easy to dodge
    -Without Horizon on the opponent, it can only travel in a straight line
    -Alexei dislikes using it, as it clashes with his own morals of freedom for everybody; he will only use it against those who have robbed others of their freedom.
    -The chain can be easily deflected/broken by spells of a higher rank.
    Duration: Three posts, or when the intended target leaves it’s range
    Cooldown: Four posts.

    Stoping spells is one thing.... stopping movement is another. Change this.
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:33 pm

    bump
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:44 pm

    Name: Abstraction
    Rank: C
    Description: Alexei focuses the power of entropy on himself, making his form unstable; for the next two posts, he takes and deals no damage from physical attacks and deals and takes double damage from spells.
    Strengths:
    -Makes him immune to attacks of a non-magical variety (attacks enhanced by magic still do damage, however)
    -doubles the damage from his spells
    Weaknesses:
    -Can only be used on himself
    -Takes double damage from spells for the duration
    -can deal no physical damage for the duration
    Duration: two posts.
    Cooldown: Four posts, starting after the duration ends.

    No. These ability must be split. To stack this would make it B-Class.
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:25 pm

    bump; replaced the spell with a rather fun one, if I say so myself.
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:29 pm

    Name: Emancipate

    Rank: C
    Description: Alexei focuses the power of entropy on the objects around him, causing their magic stores to be violently and immediately freed. Causes all items with abilities within 15m of Alexei to deal C-Rank damage to everybody within 2m around them, and for items of non-Sacred rarities to lose their abilities for 2 posts.

    Strengths:
    -Is extremely effective against mages who use lots of magical weapons, like Requip mages.

    -Anarchism damage is dealt to all affected weapons as well.

    Weaknesses:
    -It does not discriminate; items of allies, and even Alexei's items, are detonated as well, making it a double-edged sword.

    -Can only affect people within 15m of Alexei, so it is less useful against ranged fighters

    -If Alexei is close enough, he can be caught in the explosion of his enemies' items

    Duration: Instant; magic drain lasts for 2 posts.

    Cooldown: Four posts, starting when the items regain their magic.

    Damage occurs once... or is D rank and happens a max of 3 times

    Also, fix the spacing between your spell descriptions and stuff.
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    Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:32 pm

    Bump.
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:33 pm

    This is.. Ironic.

    Due to the chaotic format, I'm approving this.

    Should something have slipped my view, due to the randomness of this magic...

    I will unapprove and this will be reopened for edits

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