Yoshi [For Mod Training]

Yoshige wrote:
Name: Yoshige Mizuzoku
Nickname: Yoshimitsu
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 6
Birthday: Februas ➉th  (Please change to either February 10th, or February Tenth.)
Sexuality: Straight
Unique Characteristics: He is very unique. (Please elaborate as to how he is very unique.)

Personality: Yoshige is a very peculiar and curious child. He tends to follow people into dangers and death, only because he wants to know why and how things are done. He tends to keep a great distance from people, due to mistrust and other little behaviors. This is most likely due to his family leaving him on the streets despite his royal and noble blood. Despite the actions taken by his family, he still cares for them, even though they couldn't give a single care about him. (So, this is kind of filled with contradictions. he likes to follow people around, willingly and knowingly into danger, yet he doesn't like people and mistrusts them? Also, this app is 86 words long, the minimum is 300.)

Likes:
- Animals : He loves all the creatures of the forest (You don't have to put an explanation, so please get rid of that last part.)
- Nature : He loves everything about it, and everything in it. (same as above)
- Building : He likes to construct things and build things. (same as above)

Dislikes:
- Being an Outcast : He hates bullies and anyone who tries to control people (same as above)
- Fire : He fears his death will be in flames. (This contradicts his personality. He is scared of death, yet he always is willing to follow people into deadly situations?)
- Ice : He doesn't like the cold, and is afraid of frostbite (You don't have to put an explanation, so please get rid of that last part.)

Motivations:
- Finding a Place He Belongs : He feels as though somewhere out there is his real home. (No need to elaborate.)
- Making Friends : He doesn't have many friends and would like to make some (No need to elaborate.)
- Protecting his Family : Even though they disown him regularly, they're all he has (No need to elaborate.)

Fears/Disgusts:
- Evil : He hates evil, and everything that comes with it (No need to elaborate.)
- Being Forgotten : He feels the need to leave a legacy behind. He doesn't want to be unknown forever.(No need to elaborate.)
- Wolves : They once left him near death as a young boy (No need to elaborate.)

Eyes: Various Shades of Brown
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: 5'2" (No human six year old is 5'2".)
Weight: 119lbs (No human six year old is 119 pounds. A six year old weighing more then about 60 pounds is considered obese. If your character really is 119 pounds at six years old, put in special characteristics that he is morbidly obese.)
Complexion: Pale Yellow

Yoshige wrote:Name: Yoshige Mizuzoku
Nickname: Yoshimitsu
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 6
Birthday: Februas ➉th
Sexuality: Straight
Unique Characteristics: He is very unique. (Please elaborate as to what makes him unique)

Personality: Yoshige has grown up distant from people. At a young age his family disowned him simply because they did not see him fit to keep their royal name. Because his family had been held up to high honor, when others found he was disowned, rather than to care for him, they bullied him. Because of this, he tends to keep a great distance of people. However, he is also quite forgiving, and should he be hurt by those close to him, he simply shakes it off. He seems to be unaffected by insults and the pain people inflict on him, but in reality he will always feel it.

However, Yoshige is also a curious child. He will often follow creatures, or venture into a dark cave just for the sake of adventure. But in spite of this, he is afraid to be alone. This is in contrast to he distancing himself from others, and often leads him into a predicament where he must endure pain to enjoy himself, or must tackle his fears and go off into the darkness alone.
(this is still short, you are at 180 words. You have 120 to go. Don't worry though, you'll get there. You could talk about how he is like in combat, or does he try to avoid combat?)
Likes:
- Animals : He loves all the creatures of the forest (No need for the description)
- Nature : He loves everything about it, and everything in it (same as above)
- Building : He likes to construct things and build things. (same as above)

Dislikes:
- Being an Outcast : He hates bullies and anyone who tries to control people (same as above)
- Fire : He fears his death will be in flames (same as above)
- Ice : He doesn't like the cold, and is afraid of frostbite (same as above)

Motivations:
- Finding a Place He Belongs : He feels as though somewhere out there is his real home (please elaborate as to why he feels this way)
- Making Friends : He doesn't have many friends and would like to make some
- Protecting his Family : Even though they disown him regularly, they're all he has (what do you mean by "disown him regularly"? do they constantly accept him back into the family, then change their mind?)

Fears/Disgusts:
- Evil : He hates evil, and everything that comes with it. (why?)
- Being Forgotten : He feels the need to leave a legacy behind. He doesn't want to be unknown forever.
- Wolves : They once left him near death as a young boy (please elaborate the story a bit)

Eyes: Various Shades of Brown 
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: 4'2" (the average height of a six year old is around three and a half feet. If you would like to keep it at 4'2, please add this to unique characteristics that he is extremely tall for a six year old)
Weight: 57lbs (if he truly was only 57 lbs at 4'2, he would be very malnourished. Either shrink him, make him something not human, or give him more weight. or, the last option, put in "unique characteristics" that he is very thin.)
Complexion: Pale Yellow

Yoshige wrote:Name: Yoshige Mizuzoku
Nickname: Yoshimitsu
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 6
Birthday: Februas ➉th
Sexuality: Straight
Unique Characteristics: He coughs up blood regularly. (Why?)

Personality: Yoshige has grown up distant from people. At a young age his family disowned him simply because they did not see him fit to keep their royal name. Because his family had been held up to high honor, when others found he was disowned, rather than to care for him, they bullied him. Because of this, he tends to keep a great distance of people. However, he is also quite forgiving, and should he be hurt by those close to him, he simply shakes it off. He seems to be unaffected by insults and the pain people inflict on him, but in reality he will always feel it.

However, Yoshige is also a curious child. He will often follow creatures, or venture into a dark cave just for the sake of adventure. But in spite of this, he is afraid to be alone. This is in contrast to he distancing himself from others, and often leads him into a predicament where he must endure pain to enjoy himself, or must tackle his fears and go off into the darkness alone.

He often finds himself lost in nature. He feels as if it's the only thing that truly accepts anyone regardless of their own past and mistakes. It is often in the forest that he tries to master his powers. It was said that it was in the wild that Yoshige mastered both the powers of ice and blood manipulation. It was at those points that he regained the love and care of his family, only for a short moment to realize that they didn't care for him at all, but rather his skill.

He often feels like he could control of his own blood flow, that he could save himself. BUt like all living creatures, he too will expire. (You are at 299, so close! Everything else looks good though)

Likes:
- Animals : He loves all the creatures of the forest
- Nature : He loves everything about it, and everything in it
- Building : He likes to construct things and build things.

Dislikes:
- Being an Outcast : He hates bullies and anyone who tries to control people
- Fire : He fears his death will be in flames
- Ice : He doesn't like the cold, and is afraid of frostbite

Motivations:
- Finding a Place He Belongs : He feels as though somewhere out there is his real home
- Making Friends : He doesn't have many friends and would like to make some
- Protecting his Family : Even though they disown him regularly, they're all he has

Fears/Disgusts:
- Evil : He hates evil, and everything that comes with it
- Being Forgotten : He feels the need to leave a legacy behind. He doesn't want to be unknown forever.
- Wolves : They once left him near death as a young boy

Eyes: Various Shades of Brown
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: 4'2" (As previously stated, the average height of a six year old is around three and a half feet. If you would like to keep it at 4'2, please add this to unique characteristics that he is extremely tall for a six year old)
Weight: 57lbs  (Also previously stated, if he truly was only 57 lbs at 4'2, he would be very malnourished. Either shrink him, make him something not human, or give him more weight. or, the last option, put in "unique characteristics" that he is very thin.)
Complexion: Pale Yellow

Yoshige wrote:Name: Yoshige Mizuzoku
Nickname: Yoshimitsu
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 6
Birthday: Februas ➉th
Sexuality: Straight
Unique Characteristics: He coughs up blood regularly, this is due to a virus that is eating away at him. The damage organs, muscles and other things are as follows:
- Nervous System: His nerves were once overloaded with blood, due to a poor blood-transfusion. Because of this, he is not receptive to most pain unless it pierces the skin.
- Lungs: Due to the virus that is eating away at him, his lungs are swollen, and often begin to fill with blood. This leads to him having trouble breathing.
- Stomach: The virus has lead to a manifestation of a disease that regularly causes his stomach acids to become constantly irradiated, leaving him forever hungry.
- Heart: His heart is weak and frail, and its beat is easily manipulated and changed. It is always under constant stress, pumping out twice as much blood as the normal heart to keep up with the viruses in Yoshige's body. This often leads to palpitations that leave Yoshige dazed at some moments.
- Eyes: His eyes are highly sensitive towards light. This causes him to be nearly blind directly under the sun, but have perfect vision at night, almost like a nocturnal animal.
- Skin: His skin is naturally cold. This is due to the concentration of heat in his central body, rather than his appendages. This leads him to wear more layers of clothing than the average person, just to be somewhat close to a normal temperature.

Personality: Yoshige has grown up distant from people. At a young age his family disowned him simply because they did not see him fit to keep their royal name. Because his family had been held up to high honor, when others found he was disowned, rather than to care for him, they bullied him. Because of this, he tends to keep a great distance of people. However, he is also quite forgiving, and should he be hurt by those close to him, he simply shakes it off. He seems to be unaffected by insults and the pain people inflict on him, but in reality he will always feel it.

However, Yoshige is also a curious child. He will often follow creatures, or venture into a dark cave just for the sake of adventure. But in spite of this, he is afraid to be alone. This is in contrast to he distancing himself from others, and often leads him into a predicament where he must endure pain to enjoy himself, or must tackle his fears and go off into the darkness alone.

He often finds himself lost in nature. He feels as if it's the only thing that truly accepts anyone regardless of their own past and mistakes. It is often in the forest that he tries to master his powers. It was said that it was in the wild that Yoshige mastered both the powers of ice and blood manipulation. It was at those points that he regained the love and care of his family, only for a short moment to realize that they didn't care for him at all, but rather his skill.

He often feels like he could control of his own blood flow, that he could save himself. AS it is with all living creatures, he too has an expiration date.

Likes:
- Animals : He loves all the creatures of the forest
- Nature : He loves everything about it, and everything in it
- Building : He likes to construct things and build things.

Dislikes:
- Being an Outcast : He hates bullies and anyone who tries to control people
- Fire : He fears his death will be in flames
- Ice : He doesn't like the cold, and is afraid of frostbite

Motivations:
- Finding a Place He Belongs : He feels as though somewhere out there is his real home
- Making Friends : He doesn't have many friends and would like to make some
- Protecting his Family : Even though they disown him regularly, they're all he has

Fears/Disgusts:
- Evil : He hates evil, and everything that comes with it
- Being Forgotten : He feels the need to leave a legacy behind. He doesn't want to be unknown forever.
- Wolves : They once left him near death as a young boy

Eyes: Various Shades of Brown
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: 2'11"
Weight: 57lbs
Complexion: Pale Yellow

Lilinette Q. Mido wrote:what o.o If this guy wants to play a walking corps, let him. His character will be dead by the first thread but hey, to each his own. Maybe he can make it a zombie xD

Lilinette Q. Mido wrote:yep