Dray Raphael

Draygglez wrote:

Name: Dray Ralph
Nickname: Ice
Gender: Male
Race: Wizard Wizard is not a race, like Kase said; put Human here instead (unless he isn't human?).
Age: 16
Birthday: 30 June
Sexuality: Homosexual
Unique Characteristics: sword tattooes on the back of palms that lightens up when he's emotionally disturbed or when he uses magic. Due to his race of wizard, an invisible blue aura is always around him that let's him sense anybody within the range fifty metres of him. That last part is A. supposed to go in the magic app, not Unique Characteristics, and B. Absurdly powerful :P. Remove it.
Personality: Draygglez is a young man of principle and philosopy. He believes that there is no loss in losing, afterall, you will learn something from loss itself. To him,he believes that since he could fend,cater and provide for himself after his parents and sister were brutally killed in a hostile war at the age of seven, then, he was absolutely sure and courageous that he could definitely find his way through life itself. Draygglez is a man of nature. He loves being in contact with mother nature and would sanction anybody that tries to hurt any creation of nature regarding the smallest of ants even if it means employing drastic and harzadious methods to stop the intruder. One of his greatest philosophies is 'never giving up'. He says this every morning to remind himself that he is a man of a specific goal,a man of fufilment, a man of achievement and a man of acknowledgement. To him, all this things can't be achieved if he gives up. If he gives up,then his father's death would have been in vain. His mother's death would have been for nothing and finally, his younger sister's blood would be on his head. That's why he is solely bent on making the best out of himself even if it means training all day and all night. Even if it means learning to control his appetite,his mode of sleep, his inner Dray and finally, gaining all the knowledge in the world. Other people wonder how a mere person, a mere orphan can gain all the knowledge in the world. But, he made them undastand that when he sets his mind on a track and when he listens to all instructions and learn from both the strong, the weak, the poor, the rich, the wise, the stupid, then, he might actually gain all the knowledge in the world since no knowledge is lost.

As much as he likes being around the core of nature, he also being with his friends since they are the only family he has left. He hates it when people mess with his friends. For this reason,he does everything to protect them even if it means giving up his life for them and for this common attitude of his, Dray has gained quite a recognition in the town.

When faced with an obstacle, probably a battle, all he does is appear calm to infuriate his opponent and speak a few word that would distabilize the foe before landing his moves. Though, not all opponents have emotions. For this reason, he prefers to annoy his opponents with his behaviour and gestures so that they become foolhardy and not think twice. Then, they attack him recklessly leaving an opening for him to strike. Dray loves interesting battles and he likes to acknowledge even his opponents. "He who fights and runs lives to fight another day". This does not depict him as a coward. It only shows his understanding of life but before dray can conclude on escaping a situation, he must have tried his possible best to conquer it but all to no avail.
Finally, dray believes that he has no limits. - you only come to a limit when you die~Draygglez Personality looks pretty good, but break up the first big paragraph a bit for readability. I also recommend a quick go-over with some spell-check software.
Likes:
-Coolness
-Training
-Friends
-Outstanding people This could mean a lot of things. Please say exactly what you mean by this.
Dislikes:
-War
-Insolence
-Spicy foods
Motivations:
-Acknowledgement
-Progress
-Friends
Fears/Disgusts:
-Death
-Losing control
-Losing friends
Eyes: Red irishes
Hair: Brown
Height: 4'11"
Weight: 70lbs
Complexion: cream-like

Draygglez wrote:

Name: Dray Ralph
Nickname: Ice
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 16
Birthday: 30 June
Sexuality: Homosexual
Unique Characteristics: sword tattooes on the back of palms that lightens up when he's emotionally disturbed or when he uses magic.
Personality: Draygglez is a young man of principle and philosopy. He believes that there is no loss in losing, afterall, you will learn something from loss itself. To him,he believes that since he could fend,cater and provide for himself after his parents and sister were brutally killed in a hostile war at the age of seven, then, he was absolutely sure and courageous that he could definitely find his way through life itself. Draygglez is a man of nature. He loves being in contact with mother nature and would sanction anybody that tries to hurt any creation of nature regarding the smallest of ants even if it means employing drastic and harzadious methods to stop the intruder.

One of his greatest philosophies is 'never giving up'. He says this every morning to remind himself that he is a man of a specific goal,a man of fufilment, a man of achievement and a man of acknowledgement. To him, all this things can't be achieved if he gives up. If he gives up,then his father's death would have been in vain. His mother's death would have been for nothing and finally, his younger sister's blood would be on his head. That's why he is solely bent on making the best out of himself even if it means training all day and all night. Even if it means learning to control his appetite,his mode of sleep, his inner Dray and finally, gaining all the knowledge in the world. Other people wonder how a mere person, a mere orphan can gain all the knowledge in the world. But, he made them undastand that when he sets his mind on a track and when he listens to all instructions and learn from both the strong, the weak, the poor, the rich, the wise, the stupid, then, he might actually gain all the knowledge in the world since no knowledge is lost.

As much as he likes being around the core of nature, he also being with his friends since they are the only family he has left. He hates it when people mess with his friends. For this reason,he does everything to protect them even if it means giving up his life for them and for this common attitude of his, Dray has gained quite a recognition in the town.

When faced with an obstacle, probably a battle, all he does is appear calm to infuriate his opponent and speak a few word that would distabilize the foe before landing his moves. Though, not all opponents have emotions. For this reason, he prefers to annoy his opponents with his behaviour and gestures so that they become foolhardy and not think twice. Then, they attack him recklessly leaving an opening for him to strike. Dray loves interesting battles and he likes to acknowledge even his opponents. "He who fights and runs lives to fight another day". This does not depict him as a coward. It only shows his understanding of life but before dray can conclude on escaping a situation, he must have tried his possible best to conquer it but all to no avail.
Finally, dray believes that he has no limits. - you only come to a limit when you die~Draygglez
Likes:
-Coolness
-Training
-Friends
-Learning
Dislikes:
-War
-Insolence
-Spicy foods
Motivations:
-Acknowledgement
-Progress
-Friends This is the same as one of your Likes. Change one of them please, it doesn't matter which.
Fears/Disgusts:
-Death
-Losing control
-Losing friends
Eyes: Red irishes
Hair: Brown
Height: 3'11"
Weight: 47lbs
Complexion: cream-like