by Weapon apps are to be done in Weapon application section.
Another Chaotic App
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I'm giving you 2 elements Mac.
This Dice thing is already getting out of hand with criticals and so forth...
This Dice thing is already getting out of hand with criticals and so forth...
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As this is a random magic... as it seems to be... I'm going to grade this as I would any app.
However, the best choice for you, in my opinion, is to be of "Toonville" Origin, rather than De Fiore, as Toon Magic has the most freedom... (Basically letting you keep more things here)
However, the best choice for you, in my opinion, is to be of "Toonville" Origin, rather than De Fiore, as Toon Magic has the most freedom... (Basically letting you keep more things here)
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Done
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Is the user being stunned, or the target?
And no auto-hit spells. However if you had a dice roll (Like at passive thing you added) that had an outcome of an suto hit... maybe.
And no auto-hit spells. However if you had a dice roll (Like at passive thing you added) that had an outcome of an suto hit... maybe.
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Now specified in the description of the spell
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You need to specify what dice you are rolling. (even if it seems straight forward. There is always Event Dice that only last for limited time for events)
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All specified and the cooldown refresher has been removed since it didn't belong in the spell anymore
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Okay, as for your second toggle... You must choose..
Either your magic is used through your weapon, or from the user.
Regardless of the "Chaotic" nature, it still needs a theme. And by the looks of it... it doesn't have that. So either you're boosting your weapon (Your hammer?) or you're casting things from your armor.
Either your magic is used through your weapon, or from the user.
Regardless of the "Chaotic" nature, it still needs a theme. And by the looks of it... it doesn't have that. So either you're boosting your weapon (Your hammer?) or you're casting things from your armor.
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It has been changed to just be the attack the holder makes
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If you're going to use Chaos Strike, I want to see of the chance of hitting yourself... an x2 to yourself.
If you're going to deal double damage, there has to be equal cost. (This case, is the chance of hurting yourself)
If you're going to deal double damage, there has to be equal cost. (This case, is the chance of hurting yourself)
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Instead of doubling the damage done to me I tripled the likelihood of the self damage occuring
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1: Electric Damage
(16.667%)
2: Acid Damage (You're going to have to specify this.)
(16.667%)
3: Fire Damage
(16.667%)
4: Cold Damage
(16.667%)
5: Holy/Positive Damage (What is positive?)
(16.667%)
6: Dark/Negative Damage (What is negative?)
And do not put "Damage" but rather elemental properties. This avoid confusion, as well as using "Unapproved" techniques. (Such as burns, corrosion, poisons... stuns... static and so forth) If you're going to use that many elements, you will not be able to "Stun" anything, nor "Silence" spells in addition to damage. A silencing spell would be separate.
(16.667%)
2: Acid Damage (You're going to have to specify this.)
(16.667%)
3: Fire Damage
(16.667%)
4: Cold Damage
(16.667%)
5: Holy/Positive Damage (What is positive?)
(16.667%)
6: Dark/Negative Damage (What is negative?)
And do not put "Damage" but rather elemental properties. This avoid confusion, as well as using "Unapproved" techniques. (Such as burns, corrosion, poisons... stuns... static and so forth) If you're going to use that many elements, you will not be able to "Stun" anything, nor "Silence" spells in addition to damage. A silencing spell would be separate.
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Primary Magic: Eldritch Chaos
finished?
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Alright, so your abilities look almost perfect! Now to clean things up, I will ask you to make a few charts. Even though I get what you're doing, and you get it, this is for the many idiots that the world has to offer! This is to avoid those people who try to say everyone is godmodding when they are the ones infact doing it... because well, they're butt hurt.
You know... Chart..
1: Thingy
2: Other thingy...
Or...
Sums:
1-3 : damage to self
4-10: Standard damage
11-12: x2 damage
Make it simple so even a 5th grader can understand!~
You know... Chart..
1: Thingy
2: Other thingy...
Or...
Sums:
1-3 : damage to self
4-10: Standard damage
11-12: x2 damage
Make it simple so even a 5th grader can understand!~
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le Done~
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Just for the sake of not overwealming me with information that's throwing me off...
Please remove the percentages.
Please remove the percentages.
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All removed
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Chaos bolt is not allowed to stun.
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Fixed
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1-2: No staggering effects/2 D-rank Damage
3-4: Interrupts casts currently being channeled/Normal D-rank Damage
5-6: Disables the targets spells for the next post/No damage
No.
This is balanced for a C- Spell. If you have a chance to do extra damage, you must have equal lost.
for x1.5 // then you have x0
For x2 // you have damage to user.
If this is not added, then you're really just making a C'Ranked spell.
(And as for "Crits" Please spell out the word. Thank you)
3-4: Interrupts casts currently being channeled/Normal D-rank Damage
5-6: Disables the targets spells for the next post/No damage
No.
This is balanced for a C- Spell. If you have a chance to do extra damage, you must have equal lost.
for x1.5 // then you have x0
For x2 // you have damage to user.
If this is not added, then you're really just making a C'Ranked spell.
(And as for "Crits" Please spell out the word. Thank you)
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Ok but can you please explain to me how 1.5 vs 1 and 1 vs 0 are equal? last time I checked +.5 =/= -1 From what I know 2 vs 1 and 1 vs 0 is equal since 1 = -1 in a gain vs loss equality
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Because you're attaching a,stun/silence to the spell.
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Ah ok that makes sense I guess
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