Wolf

Note: All abilities go in as "Abilities." Just because you say you can do it in your description, does not mean you can do it.

1. ) You get 3 starter abilities.
2. ) You said your magic is Earth, but your spell is Poison. As a result, the elements you will receive are: Nature/Wood, Earth and Death.

And before I even really look into your spell, remember this is based on post count, and you are after all, just an F-Class right now.

EDIT: Spell looks fine, just know it would only work on people your Class Level and below. There's no way that would effect a higher ranked user.. at least not at this stage, but later on it will. However to have something that Debuffs or attacks the user's senses and such, you need to go into what the effects are. As headaches I want examples (Like tsukuyomi genjutsu from Naruto ) like it feels like needles or a hammer hitting their head.

In other words it looks good, and I like it, but it needs a bit more info so we all know what it does.

Okay, updated!

Alright, as I always do, abilities before spells.

-Her body naturally camoflagues into the background if she holds still, and she can do this in pretty much any terrain, thanks to her feathers.
-Has trained her tongue so she can be swift and detailed when it comes to persuasion, and considers it one of her many talents.
-She is not effected by any poison/venom/toxic attacks, unless they are made by strong D ranks or above, in which case she will have special resistance to it until S rank.

Alright, so I know you're adjusting to the formats of the site, as after all you came from a Sandboxy time place... So now here we go..

Black : This is fine, but it's kinda odd. So to fit with the context of powers on the site. Say that if she stays still for one post (Does not attack) She camouflages into the environment. Keep in mind this would work in a forest... and not a busy city street.
Purple : Technically, this isn't an ability. Persuasion is a skill of the roleplayer, not the character. However if you want to say that she can convince NPCs of her rank and below, this would be fine. (Not that I think about it... I wish I made this power for myself....)
Blue : Posion resistance is alright, but for resistance, we put it into a chart. Use the template below to create the power at the scale desired.

Code:

- Spells 6 ranks below user : __%
- Spells 5 ranks below user : __%
- Spells 4 ranks below user : __%
- Spells 3 ranks below user : __%
- Spells 2 ranks below user : __%
- Spells 1 rank below user :  __%
- Spells equal ranked to user : __%
- Spells 1 rank above user : __%
- Spells 2 rank above user : __%
- Spells 3 rank above user : __%

Mmm, okay, I'll edit those things. But, just out of curiosity, why do I have a gravestone by my name? >.> Last I checked I wasn't dead.

http://www.unknownlandsrp.com/t34-achievement-system-and-request-thread-official

Okay, I think I've updated it for the final(?) time.

Max Resistance for things your own rank... is 50%

Adjust accordingly.

Also, no spell lasts "Infinite" time. Max is 3 posts.. in your case, it's "Instant" cooldown is 2 Posts.

Ugh, this limits my entire history. -.- But fine, I'll change it, even though it makes no sense lore wise for Zinnia.

Then you can upgrade this when you rank up.

Desciption is how the cloud is formed. Is it jsut made? Do you spit it out? Does it come from your butt?

Also, cooldown is longer that duration

(If you want tp keep it around longer, you can make it "Sustainable" meaning you can keep it there for half the cost of MP/Mana that it would normally cost.)

Okay, fixed. *Dies*