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    Kaseki
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    Post by Kaseki Mon Dec 21, 2015 2:50 pm

    So I've given you the LIFE element as your primary, as your spell offers a buff on top of a defense.

    Spirit is your secondary due to sensing, as well your Focus ability.

    However I will suggest you add that the armor can protect against 2 D-ranked hits, and lower duration to 3 posts.

    Or you can keep the max 5 posts, but only gain the % buff.
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    Post by Renny Mon Dec 21, 2015 3:03 pm

    Well here's the thing. If I do make it a max duration of 3 and instead cancel out 2 D ranks worth of attack, it would ultimately be a worse version of Malm's Oakenform spell. Which at the same rank is able to block 2 D rank attacks, doesn't require the focus cost to keep up, and is able to be casted on someone nearly twice the distance.

    I know comparing the two isn't the best idea as Oakenform was created is a less strict time, yet I do feel the mention to point it out. I just personally do not like making relatively worse spells then those I made before (or basically repeating spells at all). So unless we can come up with some other way, I'm afraid the spell is probably going to have to remain in it's state.
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    Post by Shini Chikai Mon Dec 21, 2015 3:07 pm

    It could still provide the buff after the physical defense is destroyed, if that is what you are concerned about. Meaning it won't protect against hits anymore, but will provide the 5% resistance.

    Also you could bump the range to 10m if you wanted.

    And the cooldown could be changed to 2 posts after it ends.
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    Post by Renny Mon Dec 21, 2015 3:13 pm

    The spell has been edited.

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