[Training] Dead man

Fetus wrote:Name: Ravage
Nickname: Bones
Gender: 4
Race: Skeleton
Age: 9000
Birthday: 4,4th
Sexuality: ???
Unique Characteristics: Skeleton
Personality: A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care.

But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant, and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

He appears as a coldhearted deadman, when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

Ravage has a habit of collecting all of his cash and rewards and simply spending every last cent on alcohol. He hates to find things of no worth, the same with people. He is friendly at the start, but only to assess someone's value. These are things he does to all new people, simply out of worth. He hates people who contribute nothing. Late at night, or when he is alone he can be found drinking or counting his money. These are two hobbies of his. He figures, with enough Rum he can rule the world, and with enough money he can buy the tools

Likes: (
- Rum
- Money
- Ships

Dislikes: - Running out of Rum
- Having no money
- Ships



Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Getting money to start up his own crew
- Buying rum
- Life

Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Not finding his family
- Actually dying
- Being lost at sea


Eyes: (no
Hair: (none
Height: 5'9
Weight: 2,000
Complexion: bone

• personality is complete and the code has been corrected, so well done.
  
• you must add reasons to your likes, dislikes, fears and motivations.
  
• add one more dislike.
  
• gender can not be 4. please change this to either male or female.
  
• Eyes needs to be a better description. put a color like Blue, white, black.
  
• weight needs to be in pounds.
  
• one motivation, Life, needs to be described better. what part of life motivates you? Life can not be a motivation.
  
• actually dying? did you die before? a better description could be returning to death.
  
• complexion can't be bones. it can be pale or white, but not bones.

• you must add reasons to your likes, dislikes, fears and motivations. ~ Don't need reasons.
  

• Eyes needs to be a better description. put a color like Blue, white, black. ~This is fine
  

• one motivation, Life, needs to be described better. what part of life motivates you? Life can not be a motivation. ~This is a viable motivation.
  
  
• actually dying? did you die before? a better description could be returning to death. ~This is viable as well.
  
  
• complexion can't be bones. it can be pale or white, but not bones. ~This is also viable.
  
  

Fetus wrote:Name: Ravage
Nickname: Bones
Gender: 4
Race: Skeleton
Age: 9000
Birthday: 4,4th
Sexuality: ???
Unique Characteristics: Skeleton
Personality: A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care.

But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant, and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

He appears as a coldhearted deadman, when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

Ravage has a habit of collecting all of his cash and rewards and simply spending every last cent on alcohol. He hates to find things of no worth, the same with people. He is friendly at the start, but only to assess someone's value. These are things he does to all new people, simply out of worth. He hates people who contribute nothing. Late at night, or when he is alone he can be found drinking or counting his money. These are two hobbies of his. He figures, with enough Rum he can rule the world, and with enough money he can buy the tools

Likes: (
- Rum
- Money
- Ships

Dislikes: - Running out of Rum
- Having no money
- Ships



Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Getting money to start up his own crew
- Buying rum
- Life

Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Not finding his family
- Actually dying
- Being lost at sea


Eyes: (no
Hair: (none
Height: 5'9
Weight: 2,000
Complexion: bone

• gender needs to change from 4 to either male or female.
  
• age needs to be realistic. 9000 is too old. something around, for example, 1-200 years old is viable.
  
• height needs to be in feet and inches.
  
• weight needs to be in pounds.
  
• unique characteristic can't be race. it must be something unique to your character that no one else can have.
  
• birthday must be look something like 1st of may, or something like that.

Fetus wrote:Name: Ravage
Nickname: Bones
Gender: Male
Race: Skeleton
Age: ∞
Birthday: 4,4th
Sexuality: ???
Unique Characteristics: Skeleton
Personality: A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care.

But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant, and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

He appears as a coldhearted deadman, when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

Ravage has a habit of collecting all of his cash and rewards and simply spending every last cent on alcohol. He hates to find things of no worth, the same with people. He is friendly at the start, but only to assess someone's value. These are things he does to all new people, simply out of worth. He hates people who contribute nothing. Late at night, or when he is alone he can be found drinking or counting his money. These are two hobbies of his. He figures, with enough Rum he can rule the world, and with enough money he can buy the tools

Likes: (
- Rum
- Money
- Ships

Dislikes: - Running out of Rum
- Having no money
- Ships



Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Getting money to start up his own crew
- Buying rum
- Life

Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Not finding his family
- Actually dying
- Being lost at sea


Eyes: (no
Hair: (none
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 2,000 pounds
Complexion: bone

• age can't be infinity.
  
• remove the (please list 3 minimum)

Fetus wrote:Name: Ravage
Nickname: Bones
Gender: Male
Race: Skeleton
Age: ∞
Birthday: 4,4th
Sexuality: ???
Unique Characteristics: Skeleton
Personality: A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care.

But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant, and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

He appears as a coldhearted deadman, when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

Ravage has a habit of collecting all of his cash and rewards and simply spending every last cent on alcohol. He hates to find things of no worth, the same with people. He is friendly at the start, but only to assess someone's value. These are things he does to all new people, simply out of worth. He hates people who contribute nothing. Late at night, or when he is alone he can be found drinking or counting his money. These are two hobbies of his. He figures, with enough Rum he can rule the world, and with enough money he can buy the tools

Likes: (
- Rum
- Money
- Ships

Dislikes: - Running out of Rum
- Having no money
- Ships



Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- Getting money to start up his own crew
- Buying rum
- Life

Fears/Disgusts: 
- Not finding his family
- Actually dying
- Being lost at sea


Eyes: (no
Hair: (none
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 2,000 pounds
Complexion: bone

• remove the last (please list 3 minimum) from motivations
  
• put your first dislike under dislikes.

Fetus wrote:Name: Ravage
Nickname: Bones
Gender: Male
Race: Skeleton
Age: ∞
Birthday: 4,4th
Sexuality: ???
Unique Characteristics: Skeleton
Personality: A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care.

But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant, and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

He appears as a coldhearted deadman, when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

Ravage has a habit of collecting all of his cash and rewards and simply spending every last cent on alcohol. He hates to find things of no worth, the same with people. He is friendly at the start, but only to assess someone's value. These are things he does to all new people, simply out of worth. He hates people who contribute nothing. Late at night, or when he is alone he can be found drinking or counting his money. These are two hobbies of his. He figures, with enough Rum he can rule the world, and with enough money he can buy the tools

Likes: (
- Rum
- Money
- Ships

Dislikes: 
- Running out of Rum
- Having no money
- Ships



Motivations: 
- Getting money to start up his own crew
- Buying rum
- Life

Fears/Disgusts: 
- Not finding his family
- Actually dying
- Being lost at sea


Eyes: (no
Hair: (none
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 2,000 pounds
Complexion: bone

• please put your birthday like 4th of April, as 4,4th could mean anything.
  
• please get rid of the brackets for eyes and hair.

Fetus wrote:Name: Ravage
Nickname: Bones
Gender: Male
Race: Skeleton
Age: ∞
Birthday: July 4th
Sexuality: ???
Unique Characteristics: Skeleton - A bit more specific for this. A walking skeleton will suffice. Or even a full sentence.
Personality: A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care.

But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant, and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

He appears as a coldhearted deadman, when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

Ravage has a habit of collecting all of his cash and rewards and simply spending every last cent on alcohol. He hates to find things of no worth, the same with people. He is friendly at the start, but only to assess someone's value. These are things he does to all new people, simply out of worth. He hates people who contribute nothing. Late at night, or when he is alone he can be found drinking or counting his money. These are two hobbies of his. He figures, with enough Rum he can rule the world, and with enough money he can buy the tools

Likes:
- Rum
- Money
- Ships

Dislikes: 
- Running out of Rum
- Having no money
- Ships



Motivations: 
- Getting money to start up his own crew
- Buying rum
- Life

Fears/Disgusts: 
- Not finding his family
- Actually dying
- Being lost at sea


Eyes: no - It would be None or N/A, not no.
Hair: none
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 2,000 pounds
Complexion: bone