Monkyu Fire

Shini Chikai wrote:Name: Monkyu
Type: Combat Pet
Rank: Strong
Race: Monkyu
Personality: A small little creature that wants to know thigns First, this is misspelled. Second, Personality needs to ve AT LEAST 50 words, please.
Description:

Name: Fireball
Rank: D
Description: Spits a fireball
Strengths:
- Deals fire ranked damage It wouldn't deal fire ranked damage. It would deal D Ranked damage because that's the rank of your spell
- It hurts Considering this is kind of a given, I'll need you to come up with a better strentgh.
Weaknesses:
- Any water destroys it I wouldn't exactly word it like this. I would say that "it takes double damage from water" for a more precise weakness.
- Mouth has to be open
- It's fire We already know that it's fire. Please come up with a better weakness.
Duration: H2 posts Please remove this H?
Cooldown: 1 Post Your cooldown needs to be at least 3 posts for a D Ranked Spell and always greater than your duration.

Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
Rank: C
Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
Strengths:
- Heals Considering this is a C Rank Pet,
You will have to specify that it only heals 7% MP eveey post.
- Passive
Weaknesses:
- Only owner If you want to put "It can only heal the owner" that would be much appreciated.
- Ranged The maximum range allowed would be 20 meters. Please specify this.
- Has a limit Ok? What's the limit?
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive

@Mei

Shini Chikai wrote:Name: Monkyu
Type: Combat Pet
Rank: Strong
Race: Monkyu
Personality: Monkyu are creatures that have only recently started to appear on Pandora. They are curious creatures that look like dolls. They wander when unattended but are fierce in battle. They often stare at their masters with tilted heads asking for explanations for everything. Rarely are they seen away from their owner's sides.
Description:

Name: Fireball
Rank: D
Description: Spits a fireball
Strengths:
- D-Ranked Damage
- Damage is considered fire based
Weaknesses:
- Any water attack canceles this spell.
- Mouth has to be open
- Limited range of 5m, This is fine to keep if you want. Just letting you know this can be up to 10 meters if you'd rather.
Duration: Instant (5m/s)
Cooldown: 2 Post This has to be at least 3 posts

Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
Rank: C
Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu You need to decide between MP and HP because your first strength states HP while your description says MP.
Strengths:
- Heals C-Ranked health
- Passive
Weaknesses:
- It can only heal the owner
- Range of 20m
- recovery is only at end of post.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive

@Mei

Shini Chikai wrote:Name: Monkyu
Type: Combat Pet
Rank: Strong
Race: Monkyu
Personality: Monkyu are creatures that have only recently started to appear on Pandora. They are curious creatures that look like dolls. They wander when unattended but are fierce in battle. They often stare at their masters with tilted heads asking for explanations for everything. Rarely are they seen away from their owner's sides.
Description:

Name: Fireball
Rank: D
Description: Spits a fireball
Strengths:
- D-Ranked Damage
- Damage is considered fire based
Weaknesses:
- Any water attack canceles this spell. Ok. This is kinda tedious, but you spelled cancels wrong.
- Mouth has to be open
- Limited range of 10m, Same thing except please remove the comma
Duration: Instant (5m/s)
Cooldown: 3 Post

Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
Rank: C
Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
Strengths:
- Heals C-Ranked magic
- Passive
Weaknesses:
- It can only heal the owner
- Range of 20m
- recovery is only at end of post.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive

Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
Rank: C
Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
Strengths:
- Heals C-Ranked magic
- Passive
Weaknesses:
- It can only heal the owner
- Range of 20m
- recovery is only at end of post.
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive