Fourth Horseman [TRAINING]

Name: The Fourth Horseman
Nickname: None
Race: Undead
Gender: Male
Age: 237 years
Birthday: October 25th
Sexuality: Unknown
Unique Characteristics: Smells like death

Personality:A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He is a smooth talker and hates everything. The fourth horseman will gladly backstab his own allies if it means he will further himself in life. He finds friends to be mere tools and objects and can be thrown away just like a used napkin. He will dispose of anyone he finds to be a threat given that they can no longer provide him a benefitial service. This causes him to appear as a tyrant, who will kill those after they have served him after their use. He is curious in nature and will often be drawn into many little things. He finds small trinkets the most interesting, as he wil often attempt to destroy, dismantle, or recreate such an object. He resides in the Kingdom of kanto, however uses the animals as slaves.  He views everything as a tempory, even his own life. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive.

In short, he is a devilish creature, and is talked among the residents of this world just as a horrific myth to kids, to keep them away from Lavender Town... the city he lives in and controls with an iron fist... and a bloodthristy appetite.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People
- Blood
- Food

Dislikes:
- Freedom
- Dying
- Losing

Motivations:
- Killing
- Not loosing a battle
- Silence

Fears/Disgusts:
- His own speech
- Lightning
- Thunder

Eyes: None
Hair: Bald
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 67lbs
Complexion: No Skin

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Fourth Horseman wrote:Name: The Fourth Horseman
Nickname: None
Race: Undead
Gender: Male
Age: 237 years
Birthday: October 25th
Sexuality: Unknown
Unique Characteristics: Smells like death

Personality:A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He is a smooth talker and hates everything. The fourth horseman will gladly backstab his own allies if it means he will further himself in life. He finds friends to be mere tools and objects and can be thrown away just like a used napkin. He will dispose of anyone he finds to be a threat given that they can no longer provide him a benefitial service. This causes him to appear as a tyrant, who will kill those after they have served him after their use. He is curious in nature and will often be drawn into many little things. He finds small trinkets the most interesting, as he wil often attempt to destroy, dismantle, or recreate such an object. He resides in the Kingdom of kanto, however uses the animals as slaves.  He views everything as a tempory, even his own life. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive.

In short, he is a devilish creature, and is talked among the residents of this world just as a horrific myth to kids, to keep them away from Lavender Town... the city he lives in and controls with an iron fist... and a bloodthristy appetite.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People
- Blood
- Food

Dislikes:
- Freedom
- Dying
- Losing

Motivations:
- Killing
- Not loosing a battle
- Silence

Fears/Disgusts:
- His own speech
- Lightning
- Thunder

Eyes: None
Hair: Bald
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 67lbs
Complexion: No Skin

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