[Training] Horseman

Name: Fourth Horseman
Nickname: No
Gender: Male
Race: Undead
Age: Unknown
Birthday: October 31st
Sexuality: Unknown
Unique Characteristics: Smells like death. Increased dexterity by 5. Speed increased by 5.

Personality: A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He is a smooth talker and hates everything. The fourth horseman will gladly backstab his own allies if it means he will further himself in life. He finds friends to be mere tools and objects and can be thrown away just like a used napkin. He will dispose of anyone he finds to be a threat given that they can no longer provide him a benefitial service. This causes him to appear as a tyrant, who will kill those after they have served him after their use. He is curious in nature and will often be drawn into many little things. He finds small trinkets the most interesting, as he wil often attempt to destroy, dismantle, or recreate such an object. He resides in the Kingdom of kanto, however uses the animals as slaves. He views everything as a tempory, even his own life. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive.

In short, he is a devilish creature, and is talked among the residents of this world just as a horrific myth to kids, to keep them away from Lavender Town... the city he lives in and controls with an iron fist... and a bloodthristy appetite.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People

Dislikes:
- Freedom
- Dying
- Losing

Motivations:
- Killing
- Not loosing a battle
- Silence
Fears/Disgusts:
- His own speech
- Lightning
- Thunder

Eyes: No
Hair: Badl
Height: 6'3
Weight: 149
Complexion: No skin

@Zinnia grade this as you would any other app.

@Toriel

Name: Dead Um, I suppose this is an okay name, abit weird, though....
Nickname: yes If you have a nickname, please state it, don't just state that you do have one.
Gender: Undead If you do not have a gender, put Agender, or genderless. Undead is not a gender. Or put the gender you had before you died.
Race: Undead Please specify what species of undead you are, such as skeleton, ghost, zombie, or even demon.
Age: N/A Please list an age. You were born at one point, and have lived as an undead.
Birthday: 10/31 Please list the date like "October 31st"
Sexuality: Unknown I would like this to be stated please. If your character does not experience sexual attraction, you can just put Asexual
Unique Characteristics: Undead While this is all fine and well, I would appreciate if you could give some more details about character. Something unique to you. Such as if they have glowing eyes, a +1 in dexterity, are surrounded with an ominous aura, etc.

Personality: A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He views everything as a tempory, even his own life. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive This does not meet the minimum requirement of 300 words. Please add more in depth to your character.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People

Dislikes:- Freedom Please list a minimum of three, and bump the -Freedom down below Dislikes.
- Dying

Motivations:
(- Not loosing a battle Please remove parenthesis, and have at least a minimum of three.
Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)Please remove (Please list 3 Minimum), and have at least three fears.
- His own speech So.... does he dislike the sound of his voice? Please specify.
- Lightning
-Add another fear here please.

Eyes: no If he does not have eyes, please say he is eyeless, not just no.
Hair: blad If you were trying to say bald, could you please correct the spelling for this.
Height: 6'3
Weight: 149
Complexion: nope This is the color of your skin, fur, whatever. If you don't have skin, at least list what your body color is.

I bump.

Name: Fourth Horseman
Nickname: No
Gender: Male
Race: Undead Please specify what kind of undead you are
Age: Undead Please list an age
Birthday: October 31st
Sexuality: Unknown
Unique Characteristics: Smells like death. Increased dexterity Can you tell me how much your dexterity is increased by?

Personality: A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He is a smooth talker and hates everything. The fourth horseman will gladly backstab his own allies if it means he will further himself in life. He finds friends to be mere tools and objects and can be thrown away just like a used napkin. He will dispose of anyone he finds to be a threat given that they can no longer provide him a benefitial service. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive.

In short, he is a devilish creature, and is talked among the residents of this world just as a horrific myth to kids, to keep them away from Lavender Town... the city he lives in and controls with an iron fist... and a bloodthristy appetite. This is still below 300 words. Please add a more in depth personality. Talk about things such as how they react in combat, as well as when relaxed, and things like that.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People

Dislikes:- Freedom
- Dying
- Losing

Motivations:
(- Not loosing a battle
Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)
- His own speech
- Lightning
- Thunder

Eyes: no
Hair: bald
Height: 6'3
Weight: 149
Complexion: no skin

Bump when finished ^-^

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Btw, UNDEAD is a valid race. It's considered zombie, or skeleton. There's no need to further specify. But it does not grant immortality.

Name: Fourth Horseman
Nickname: No
Gender: Male
Race: Undead
Age: Unknown
Birthday: October 31st
Sexuality: Unknown
Unique Characteristics: Smells like death. Increased dexterity by 17. This is way too much. Please lower it to something like +5, or below~

Personality: A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He is a smooth talker and hates everything. The fourth horseman will gladly backstab his own allies if it means he will further himself in life. He finds friends to be mere tools and objects and can be thrown away just like a used napkin. He will dispose of anyone he finds to be a threat given that they can no longer provide him a benefitial service. This causes him to appear as a tyrant, who will kill those after they have served him after their use. He is curious in nature and will often be drawn into many little things. He finds small trinkets the most interesting, as he wil often attempt to destroy, dismantle, or recreate such an object. He resides in the Kingdom of kanto, however uses the animals as slaves. He views everything as a tempory, even his own life. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People

Dislikes:- FreedomPlease space -Freedom down below Dislikes:
- Dying
- Losing

Motivations:
(- Not loosing a battle Please remove the parenthesis, and add at least two more motivations.
Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)Please remove the parenthesis
- His own speech
- Lightning
- Thunder

Eyes: no Please capitalize "no"
Hair: baldPlease capitalize "bald"
Height: 6'3
Weight: 149
Complexion: no skinPlease capitalize "no skin"

Bump when done plz~

That moment when you edit, then forget to bump.

Name: Fourth Horseman
Nickname: No
Gender: Male
Race: Undead
Age: Unknown
Birthday: October 31st
Sexuality: Unknown
Unique Characteristics: Smells like death. Increased dexterity by 5. Do you think you could change this to speed increased by +5?

Personality: A horrifying creature who gave up his life to live forever. HE lives based on a curse to speak in poetry and prose. He is a smooth talker and hates everything. The fourth horseman will gladly backstab his own allies if it means he will further himself in life. He finds friends to be mere tools and objects and can be thrown away just like a used napkin. He will dispose of anyone he finds to be a threat given that they can no longer provide him a benefitial service. This causes him to appear as a tyrant, who will kill those after they have served him after their use. He is curious in nature and will often be drawn into many little things. He finds small trinkets the most interesting, as he wil often attempt to destroy, dismantle, or recreate such an object. He resides in the Kingdom of kanto, however uses the animals as slaves. He views everything as a tempory, even his own life. He is set to leave his mark on the world, even if it means that no one would ever know, he wants his actions to have an effect on pandora forever. He knows that even though his life is extended, he will have an expiration date. He hates the world and everyone in it. If he could, he would wipe out the world. He would be content being the last living creature on earth, as his bonds with people are only temporary. Fourth horseman is a creature of evil and emotionless hatred for no good reason. If he could sell his mother to the devil for a cookie, we would... if his mother was still alive. Please make this just a little bit longer. And please go over it and look for any spelling or grammar errors you may spot.

Likes:
- Captivity
- Death
- Killing People

Dislikes: - Freedom Please space "-Freedom" down below dislikes, thank you.
- Dying
- Losing

Motivations:
- Killing
- Not loosing a battle
- Silence
Please space this.
Fears/Disgusts: Please list 3 Minimum Please delete "Please list 3 minimum"
- His own speech
- Lightning
- Thunder

Eyes: NO Not all caps, please, just the first letter.
Hair: BALDNot all caps, please, just the first letter.
Height: 6'3
Weight: 149
Complexion: NO SKINNot all caps, please, just the first letter.

Bump when ready~

I thought you said I could have dexterity?

Hmm....... I suppose you can. I just wanted to specify if it was acrobatics, stealth, speed, etc. Because dexterity can refer to all of those.

Momma Akira has come by orders of the Kaseki to complete your training! ;P So, here we go! Bump!

Hello? Anyone there? Bump Bump!

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