by Edits are in red (Also, could you change you profile pic to your fc? thanks)
Kitteh wrote:(some things maybe referencing previous magic as I am using a character from another site because kaseki said worlds were practically the same although as story progresses he will be addressed as a different dimension version)
Name: Multiple Personality summon
Type: Summoning
Usage: Summoning (Change to "Conjuring")
Description: Kaito after orphanage and training in other magic's felt lonely and depressed. This led to the start of voices in his head or multiple personality disorder. Kaito had the first personality when he was 17, and has kept with that one since, but as his magic power grows and he gets used to other things he will get more. That though is just the disorder where the magic comes in is when kaito wants he can summon his personalities to fight with him. These personalities could be versions of him from the past, different emotion summons, or different animals or even genders of him. (If you could just explain that the MPD is the reason you had forgotten and separated these various magics into different summons, that would clear up a lot of confusion in the future. thank you. :) )
Summons:
- F-rank spells:
(Please put an age so i know what i'm dealing here. "Young" doesn't really help)
- The memory:
Summon Name:young Kaito
Nickname: the memory
Rank:F (Change this to D)
Type:n/a
Gender: Male
Height: 4'10 (How old is young kaito supposed to be? 4'10 is about the height of a 13 year old)
Weight: 70lbs (being 70 lbs at 4'10 would mean that he was horribly malnourished. Make him shorter or make him heavier.)
Personality: Young Kaito is Kaito's child senses, he always wants to play, and He never wants to be serious, but he also is thoughtful and tells Kaito old happy memories from his childhood.
Strengths:-can cure kaito from a mental curse or effect his rank or higher (Can cure mental curses of D-rank proportion. He can not cure higher then his rank, and there is nothing lower then D-rank so just put D-rank)
-Is two times faster than kaito, because of his youth (Nope, the average human in their twenties can run about 15 mph. Your telling me that you know children that can run 30 miles per hour? No. You don't. I'll let you do 25% faster)
-deals F-rank damage each punch (again, D-rank damage)
Weaknesses:-young kaito is not that smart
-young kaito falls asleep at 7:00pm so no use summoning him then
-young kaito wants kaito to play every second of his life and when that does not happen young kaito starts complaining
(You need one more weakness than strength)
Abilities:I was gonna fill this out, but I was unsure why I needed this as he has abilities in his stengths. (Don't care, list the abilities here)
(You need a cool down and duration for your summon. I recommend 4 post duration and 5 post cool down)
Spells:
Name: wings of youth
Rank: F (F-rank is not a thing for spells, change this to D)
Description:when kaito was younger his magic was to turn into a bird and so young kaito has gained part of this power being a younger version of himself summon. So now kaito's younger self has wings
Strengths:-gives young kaito wings so he can fly
-makes young kaito go 2x faster than previously he had (A D-rank buff would certainly not increase your speed by 100%. Maybe 15% or 20%)
Weaknesses:
- Young kaito has a tendency to fly into walls
-the wings young kaito has are his arms transformed therefore he will take damage in the arms when the wings are hit.
(You need one more weakness here)
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
