weapons of the weak

by **Kitteh** Tue Aug 18, 2015 8:43 am

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Post n°1

weapons of the weak

Post by Kitteh Tue Aug 18, 2015 8:43 am

Bobby:

Last edited by Kitteh on Tue Aug 18, 2015 5:10 pm; edited 1 time in total

by **Lilinette Q. Mido** Tue Aug 18, 2015 12:47 pm

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Post n°2

Re: weapons of the weak

Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Tue Aug 18, 2015 12:47 pm

You start off with one weak weapon. Please get rid of one of them and then i will grade it.

(I recommend the knives because there are more you will have to change to the knives then for the gloves)

by **Kitteh** Tue Aug 18, 2015 3:06 pm

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Post n°3

Re: weapons of the weak

Post by Kitteh Tue Aug 18, 2015 3:06 pm

I got them in the prize box

by **Lilinette Q. Mido** Tue Aug 18, 2015 4:03 pm

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Post n°4

Re: weapons of the weak

Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Tue Aug 18, 2015 4:03 pm

Lesson one: Never assume that staff keeps up with this crap. I need proof.

Lesson two: One application per thread. So go make another thread with one of them.

by **Kitteh** Tue Aug 18, 2015 5:07 pm

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Character Name: Kaito
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Primary Magic: ----

Post n°5

Re: weapons of the weak

Post by Kitteh Tue Aug 18, 2015 5:07 pm

Kk

by **Lilinette Q. Mido** Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:41 pm

Lilinette Q. Mido

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Class : B
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Experience : 1100

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Character Name: Lilinette Q. Mido
Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic: Elemental golem creation

Post n°6

Re: weapons of the weak

Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:41 pm

Edits in red and pink.

Kitteh wrote:Name: Bobby
Type: Punching glove (this should say "Weapon")
Rank: weak
Description:
gloves:
outside of glove:
Length:tell end of hand (tell?)
Weight:30lbs
Strengths:
-causes D-rank damage
-causes a 2 foot knock-back range (this sounds like an ability, and weak weapons don't get any abilities. )
Weaknesses:
-Kaito only has one
-if you pick the gloves up from the ground your back might break (thirty pounds? almost no one over the age of 14 would have trouble picking up thirty pounds. Also, this sounds like an ability.)
-The glove is flammable

This in no way looks like a weak weapon. Get rid of the pic of the spikes, the spikes make it a strong/legendary weapon. Also, get rid of the non-picture spoilers.