Unknown Lands

by **Fetus** Sat Oct 03, 2015 10:16 pm

Fetus: Lineage : Martyr's Soul
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 1022
Sacred Shards : 16
Class : C
Level : 23
Experience : 10870

Character Sheet
Character Name: Fetus
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Primary Magic: Dog

Post n°1

Gun

Post by Fetus Sat Oct 03, 2015 10:16 pm

= Weak Ranged Weapons =
- Reach of no more than 25 Yards to do C-Rank Damage (Pistols)
- Limited ammo of 25 rounds without the aid of storage.
- It will break after 1 D Rank Spell hit or 2 weak weapon hits

You need to state how much it can hold at a single time, as well as reload time.

It's a given that it comes with 25 bullets, so word your sentence better.

by **Shira** Sat Oct 03, 2015 10:58 pm

Shira

Shira: Lineage : Legend's Trio, Static Lightning
Position : None
Origin : Forgotten Isles
Posts : 162
Sacred Shards : 2
Class : D
Level : 10
Experience : 260

Character Sheet
Character Name: Shira Razike
Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic: Neko Neko no Mi

Post n°2

Re: Gun

Post by Shira Sat Oct 03, 2015 10:58 pm

Fixed

by **Fetus** Sun Oct 04, 2015 1:20 am

Fetus

Fetus: Lineage : Martyr's Soul
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 1022
Sacred Shards : 16
Class : C
Level : 23
Experience : 10870

Character Sheet
Character Name: Fetus
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Primary Magic: Dog

Post n°3

Re: Gun

Post by Fetus Sun Oct 04, 2015 1:20 am

You need to sate the damage of each shot. Seeing as you fire 4 bullets, you can say it deals D-Ranked damage with each successful hit. You also need to state the speed of the shots.

by **Shira** Mon Oct 05, 2015 12:55 am

Shira

Shira: Lineage : Legend's Trio, Static Lightning
Position : None
Origin : Forgotten Isles
Posts : 162
Sacred Shards : 2
Class : D
Level : 10
Experience : 260

Character Sheet
Character Name: Shira Razike
Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic: Neko Neko no Mi