The First Skill

Name: Kumokami no Tsūru (Spider God's Tools)
Type: Thread
Usage: Conjuration
Description: Kumokami no tsūru is a lost magic and is only given to an individual who proves their worth to the Arachnid Queen. It gives the user three primary abilities; the first is to spawn and manipulate lengths of magical threads. The second is the ability to spawn magical sewing needles. The third ability is to be able to manipulate and control spiders of all sorts. Balthazar Bliss was able to gain this magic after taking up a gamble with the Arachnid Queen. The gamble was, if Bliss could bring something that would please her, he then would be granted the ability to use the magic called Kumokami no tsūru, but if he gave her something that displeased her, he would lose his life. Bliss unfortunately had nothing; he had no gold and jewels. Instead he tore some cloth of his coat, he then took some of the Arachnid Queens webs and used it as thread, and made her a small stuffed teddy bear using the strong web as a thread and part of his clothes a fabric and stuffing. The Queen was touched by his simple gift, and impressed of how he had nothing, but he used what he had around him to create a simple but beautiful token. The Queen was sick of the generic offerings of gold and jewels, and other material things of the wealth; she saw something different in Bliss. The Queen then gave him the magic of the spider gods, Kumokami no Tsūru, as sign of respect and favoritism of the strange young man that went by the name of Bliss.
Abilities:
Ever thread: The threads can withstand extreme pressure, the more pressure is applied the stronger it gets, but the threads can still be cut by cutting base spells. (Chart refers to what rank and how many pounds of force a thread can handle.)
D-rank = 200 lbs
C-rank = 400 lbs
B-rank = 800 lbs
A-rank = 1600 lbs
S-rank = 3200 lbs
H-rank = 6400 lbs
X-rank = 12800 lbs
?-rank = 25600 lbs

Regenerating Threads: If the threads are cut by an opponent’s spell, the threads will bind together again in three posts, while the threads are regenerating those threads are rendered useless until they are repaired.

Threads of Life: The threads are small and hard to see. This allows the caster to easily create them and attach them to various things. At each rank is how many threads can be made. The threads themselves cannot do damage.
F-rank = 100 Threads
D-rank = 1,000 Threads
C-rank = 10,000 Threads
B-rank = 100,000 Threads
A-rank = 1,000,000 Threads
S-rank = 10,000,000 Threads
H-rank = 100,000,000 Threads
X-rank = 1,000,000,000 Threads
?-rank = 100,000,000,000 Threads

Spells:
Name: Arachnid King's Puppetry
Rank: D
Description: the caster makes a stuffed animal and uses it as a puppet. the caster can control up to 3 puppets at the same time, the puppets must be within 15 meters for the caster to control them.
Strengths:
- The puppets are strong and can deal D rank damage.
- The puppets can be used for offense and defense. The puppets can attack, they can also defend the caster.
Weaknesses:
- The puppets can be broken after 2 D rank hits.
- To control the puppets require concentration. (Must focus on the puppets to control them, and only the puppets)
- It takes 1 posts to make a puppet.
Duration: 3 Posts (Per Puppet)
Cooldown: 4 Posts

Nameless wrote:Name: Kumokami no Tsūru (Spider God's Tools)
Type: Thread
Usage: Conjuration
Description: Kumokami no tsūru is a lost magic and is only given to an individual who proves their worth to the Arachnid Queen. It gives the user three primary abilities; the first is to spawn and manipulate lengths of magical threads. The second is the ability to spawn magical sewing needles. The third ability is to be able to manipulate and control spiders of all sorts. Balthazar Bliss was able to gain this magic after taking up a gamble with the Arachnid Queen. The gamble was, if Bliss could bring something that would please her, he then would be granted the ability to use the magic called Kumokami no tsūru, but if he gave her something that displeased her, he would lose his life. Bliss unfortunately had nothing; he had no gold and jewels. Instead he tore some cloth of his coat, he then took some of the Arachnid Queens webs and used it as thread, and made her a small stuffed teddy bear using the strong web as a thread and part of his clothes a fabric and stuffing. The Queen was touched by his simple gift, and impressed of how he had nothing, but he used what he had around him to create a simple but beautiful token. The Queen was sick of the generic offerings of gold and jewels, and other material things of the wealth; she saw something different in Bliss. The Queen then gave him the magic of the spider gods, Kumokami no Tsūru, as sign of respect and favoritism of the strange young man that went by the name of Bliss.
Abilities:
Ever thread: The threads can withstand extreme pressure, the more pressure is applied the stronger it gets, but the threads can still be cut by cutting base spells. (Chart refers to what rank and how many pounds of force a thread can handle.)
D-rank = 200 lbs
C-rank = 400 lbs
B-rank = 800 lbs
A-rank = 1600 lbs
S-rank = 3200 lbs Add a couple more ranks to this, just to make it comprehensive.

Regenerating Threads: If the threads are cut by an opponent’s spell, the threads will bind together again in three posts, while the threads are regenerating those threads are rendered useless until they are repaired. If this is true, there should probably be an upper limit of threads. A high number, but infinite regenerating threads could be pretty broken >.>

Threads binding: The threads never get tangled with one another, they also bind and tie themselves to an object if the caster concentrates on an object, it does not untie until the the caster says so. (Chart refers to how long the threads are tied to something per rank)
D-rank = 5 posts
C-rank = 10 posts
B-rank = 15 posts
A-rank = 25 posts
S-rank = 35 posts This has to be a spell, since it's pretty powerful. It should also last much shorter at all ranks, since even a 5-post bind is really good.

Spells:
Name: Arachnid King's Puppetry
Rank: D
Description: the caster makes a stuffed animal and uses it as a puppet. the caster can control up to 3 puppets at the same time, the puppets must be within 15 meters for the caster to control them.
Strengths:
- The puppets are strong and can deal D rank damage.
- The puppets can be used for offense and defense. The puppets can attack, they can also defend the caster.
Weaknesses:
- The puppets can be broken after 2 D rank hits. Lower this to at least 1 D-Rank spell, if not more.
- To control the puppets require concentration. How much concentration? Be specific.
- It takes 1 posts to make a puppet.
Duration: 3 Posts (Per Puppet)
Cooldown: 4 Posts If the cooldown is 4 posts and the duration is three, how do you have more than one puppet around at a time? >.>

Edits are in orange.

I can barely read the edits.

But there, some changes.

Explaination: Duration/Cooldown: Each puppet has it's own duration and summon time. MEANING, they're summoned at different times. Each puppet having it's cooldown time. IF the puppets are made ahead of time, this spell does not make puppets, it only controls them.

Bump...

C'mon mod. XD

"I've waited over a month. Seriously can SOMEONE look over my magic?"

hmmm approved