Clothing [Mod training]

by **Nameless** Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:25 pm

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Post n°1

Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Nameless Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:25 pm

Name: Jacket of Warmth
Type: Clothing
Rank: Weak
Description: A white coat with red flames. It is long, and touches the ground. It is very warm.

Spoiler:

Strengths:
- It looks cool
- It blends in with snow
Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
- Just a jacket
- Does nothing at all
- Doesn't protect against anything
Ability: nothing at all

Last edited by Nameless on Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:18 pm; edited 1 time in total

by **Chaostothemax** Thu Nov 20, 2014 11:20 am

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 11:20 am

Nameless wrote:Name: Jacket of Warmth
Type: Clothing Change this to Armor, please, just to make it fit within the framework.
Rank: Weak
Description: A white coat with read flames Fix the typo, please, and add a bit more info. How long is it? Does it have sleeves? Where are the flames in the design?
Strengths:
- It looks cool You need at least two strengths. Please add one more.
Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
- Just a jacket
- Does nothing at all You need one more weakness than strength; when you add another strength, add a weakness as well.
Ability: Looks awesome Weak Weapons cannot have abilities. Please remove this (although it can still look awesome :P)

Edits are in blue. In all honesty, you probably don't need to make this a full item; if your character has this in his FC, it can just be considered part of your outfit.

by **Nameless** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:19 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Nameless Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:19 pm

Bump

Armor = Protection

Clothing can be approved, if it protects... it's armor.

And what If I change my FC? Then where is the jacket?

by **Chaostothemax** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:23 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:23 pm

Nameless wrote:Name: Jacket of Warmth
Type: Clothing
Rank: Weak
Description: A white coat with red flames. It is long, and touches the ground. It is very war, Not sure if this is a typo or an unfinished sentence, but either way, clean it up.
Strengths:
- It looks cool
- It blends in with snow
Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
- Just a jacket
- Does nothing at all
- Doesn't protect against anything
Ability: Does not look awesome Just leave this blank or put N/A, please.

Edits are in blue, once again. Fair point about the changing FC; I forgot that this is Nameless I'm dealing with :P But what if it doesn't protect? Can it still be approved as armor?

by **Darkurr** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:30 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Darkurr Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:30 pm

Quite honestly, you could register a hat. Weak is more for just... Items that are kinda useful... and people who get bored... like this.

I could register outfits. If they are just clothing, then.. well, it's clothing.

I wouldn't register something that doesn't protect as armor... It's not armor if it doesn't protect

by **Chaostothemax** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:31 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:31 pm

All right. I'll just wait for Nameless to get on and make the final edits, then :)

by **Nameless** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:50 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Nameless Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:50 pm

I did?

by **Chaostothemax** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:54 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Chaostothemax Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:54 pm

Oh, so you did >.> Approved, looks good.

by **Nameless** Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:56 pm

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Re: Clothing [Mod training]

Post by Nameless Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:56 pm

PASS.

Locking McLocklock~

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