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    Post by Red Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:28 pm

    Name: Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type: Lightning
    Usage: Casting
    Description:  The magic is thought to the caster by the great lightning dragon by the name Akzagravia, which once ago struck a small village by the edge of the Fiore Kingdom’s border. The magic works in a way that it lets the caster utilize lightning created from the body for various purposes, and some of them including beams and projectiles. As known as one of the Slayer Magic variants, the Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic lets the caster eat any non-slayer lightning magic at will.
    Abilities:
    - Increased Speed: Being a utilizer of a lightning magic, the caster’s attacking speed will increase by 5% whilst in battles, making the caster faster in terms of rate of delivering melee blows.
    - Lightning Engulf: The chosen body parts of the caster will be engulfed in lightning every time the caster gets into battles, which in turn increases the melee damages dealt from the caster's blows to the enemies by 10%. This ability will automatically activate every 5 posts, and will last 2 posts for every time it appears.
    - Lightning Durability: The caster will also receive an enhanced durability against Lightning based spells. The chart below shows how much damage coming from said based spells will be reduced by percentage:
     
     - Spells 6 ranks below user : 60%
     - Spells 5 ranks below user : 50%
     - Spells 4 ranks below user :45%
     - Spells 3 ranks below user : 40%
     - Spells 2 ranks below user : 35%
     - Spells 1 rank below user :  30%
     - Spells equal ranked to user : 25%
     - Spells 1 rank above user : 20%
     - Spells 2 rank above user : 17%
     - Spells 3 rank above user : 15 %
     - Spells 4 rank above user : 13 %
     - Spells 5 rank above user : 10 %
     - Spells 6 rank above user : 5 %

    Spells:
    Name:  Lightning Dagger
    Rank: D
    Description:  The caster grows a pair of short daggers made up of lightning on the wrists. The daggers will grow backwards, making it protrude on the outer side of the wrist. For example, the dagger will grow on the right side of the wrist on the right hand and the same goes to the left hand. The daggers will be as long as 20 cm. The daggers can cause cuts which will have depths of 2 inches.
    Strengths:
    - The daggers can cause electrocuting that will cause paralyze on one limb that gets struck twice in 2 posts for 1 post. .
    - The daggers can help the caster inflict cut damages to the target, giving the caster an upper hand in battles.
    - 4 of the slashes from the daggers will break a D-ranked shield, provided that each 2 slashes will break one of the daggers.  

    Weaknesses:
    - The spell can only be used in combat ranged battles. If the enemy is a mid or long ranged type, the spell is rendered useless.
    - The spell can only cause paralyze on targets of F and D-rank only.
    - The daggers each will break instantly in one slash if met against a shield C-rank and higher.
    - The daggers cannot be thrown away like a shuriken or some sort because they will be fixed on the caster's wrists.

    Duration: 2 posts maximum
    Cooldown: 4 posts


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    Post by Kaseki Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:55 pm

    You only gget 3 abilities
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    Post by Red Sat Jan 03, 2015 9:45 pm

    edited, bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Sat Jan 03, 2015 10:18 pm

    - Spell Devour: The caster will be able to eat any non-slayer lightning spell to gain MP, with conditions that the spell still will inflict some damages on the caster, and that the caster can only devour ONE lightning spell at a time. The spell eaten must also be of the same rank as the caster or lower, and only one rank higher maximum. The MP gained will be 25% of the maximum MP of the caster.

    You realize that is already built into your magic, right?

    http://www.unknownlandsrp.com/t360-slayer-positions-what-it-means

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    Post by Red Sat Jan 03, 2015 10:27 pm

    edited bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Sun Jan 04, 2015 9:40 am

    - Lightning Durability: The caster will be able to withstand the damages inflicted by a lightning based non-slayer magic, in turn only taking 60% of the total damages said kind of spell of the same rank will normally inflict. For spells lower than the caster’s rank, the damage taken will only be 45%, and for spells higher than the caster, it will be 75%.

    That needs to be a chart. I undertand it... but if you get hit by an S-Ranked Spell at F-Class, you's fawked.

    - Spells 2 ranks below user : __%
    - Spells 1 rank below user : __%
    - Spells equal ranked to user : __%
    - Spells 1 rank above user : __%...

    Y'kno, something like that.
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    Post by Red Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:57 pm

    edited bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:59 pm

    - Lightning Durability has 0 explaination on what it does...

    and you need to tone this all down. You have like insane buffs, with no cooldowns. REMEMBER... even lineages have cooldowns. This is no different.
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    Post by Red Mon Jan 05, 2015 6:51 am

    toned down the percentages of the abilities. Also added a little bit explanation on the Lightning Durability ability and the chart.

    edited, bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Mon Jan 05, 2015 7:03 am

    - Increased Speed: Being a utilizer of a lightning magic, the caster’s speed will increase by 5% whilst in battles, making the caster faster in terms of rate of delivering melee blows.

    So you attack faster... or you can run faster? I don't get it.


    on the spell, keep the abilities out of the description. Put that ONLY in strengths. Then balance it out with weaknesses. Also, from what it sounds like... you have some assassin's creed looking things,... so.. elaborate on the measurements on these "daggers of lightning"
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    Post by Red Mon Jan 05, 2015 7:14 am

    edited. now ... *licks lips* bump~
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    Post by Kaseki Mon Jan 05, 2015 9:15 am

    " The daggers can cause minor cuts which will have depths of 2 inches. "

    I honestly didn't read anything but this, this time.

    WHEN HAS A 2 INCH DEEP WOUND EVER BEEN MINOR?
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    Post by Red Mon Jan 05, 2015 10:19 pm

    well, dropped the minor thingy XD

    edited! bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Tue Jan 06, 2015 9:30 pm

    Cooldown needs to be longer than duration
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    Post by Red Wed Jan 07, 2015 4:34 am

    put a longer cooldown than the duration! edited, bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:58 am

    - The daggers will also 4 of the slashes from the daggers will break a D-ranked shield, provided that each 2 slashes will break one of the daggers.

    .. wut?

    And lower the duration to 2 posts.
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    Post by Red Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:34 pm

    edited, bump!
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    Post by Kaseki Wed Jan 07, 2015 8:21 pm

    For an F-Class, this is fine.

    However, when you reach D, expect a LOT of upgrades and downgrades

    (F-Class is liek a test drive)

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