by Bump. I think I did it right. Sorry for my noobness. I don't even know if that's a word lol.
Shadow
NightMare
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Class : F
Level : 1
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Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic:
Kaseki
Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
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Origin : Pandora
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Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle
Gonna start small...
No such thing as F-Rank Spells
Lowest is D rank
No such thing as F-Rank Spells
Lowest is D rank
NightMare-
Lineage : Legend's Trio, Phoenix Fire
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Origin : De Fiore
Posts : 16
Sacred Shards : 11
Class : F
Level : 1
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Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic:
well that is changed. Well, I knew it might be OP or rather too much, but I thought to myself I rather start big and reduce it down than start small and never find out to what extend i can make my skill awesome.
But lets begin the grading....Master Kaseki.
But lets begin the grading....Master Kaseki.
Kaseki-
Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
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Origin : Pandora
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Class : Ω
Level : ∞
Experience : ∞
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Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle
You cannot eat other magic, however you can gain MP from it.
I'm going to need you to change EVERYTHING.... Involving a boost in the Daytime, you're a SHADOW slayer (of some degree) you gain MP in SHADOWS, not the LIGHT.
Change that.
If you do this all... you should be done.
(Also change the reach of your D-Class Shadow to 10 Meters)
I'm going to need you to change EVERYTHING.... Involving a boost in the Daytime, you're a SHADOW slayer (of some degree) you gain MP in SHADOWS, not the LIGHT.
Change that.
If you do this all... you should be done.
(Also change the reach of your D-Class Shadow to 10 Meters)
NightMare-
Lineage : Legend's Trio, Phoenix Fire
Position : None
Origin : De Fiore
Posts : 16
Sacred Shards : 11
Class : F
Level : 1
Experience : 0
Character Sheet
Character Name:
Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic:
You cannot eat other magic, however you can gain MP from it. - changed. I reworded it. I don't know if you will like it or not but i think it makes sense in my mind.
I'm going to need you to change EVERYTHING.... Involving a boost in the Daytime, you're a SHADOW slayer (of some degree) you gain MP in SHADOWS, not the LIGHT. - changed to in shadow and darkness.
Change that.
If you do this all... you should be done.
(Also change the reach of your D-Class Shadow to 10 Meters) - changed.
I'm going to need you to change EVERYTHING.... Involving a boost in the Daytime, you're a SHADOW slayer (of some degree) you gain MP in SHADOWS, not the LIGHT. - changed to in shadow and darkness.
Change that.
If you do this all... you should be done.
(Also change the reach of your D-Class Shadow to 10 Meters) - changed.
Kaseki-
Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 4902
Sacred Shards : ∞
Class : Ω
Level : ∞
Experience : ∞
Character Sheet
Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle
Gluttony, remove the whole thing. You have that ability, PERIOD. It's in Slayer rules
Also, you have a weakness to Light Magic as well. You are both each other's weakness.
And the spell thing... Rather than "(At this rank only against one player) " just say it can only target one user at a time.
Bump when edits are made
Also, you have a weakness to Light Magic as well. You are both each other's weakness.
And the spell thing... Rather than "(At this rank only against one player) " just say it can only target one user at a time.
Bump when edits are made
Kaseki-
Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 4902
Sacred Shards : ∞
Class : Ω
Level : ∞
Experience : ∞
Character Sheet
Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle
My bad... you can keep the first sentence of gluttony.
Delete the rest.
Delete the rest.
NightMare-
Lineage : Legend's Trio, Phoenix Fire
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Origin : De Fiore
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Level : 1
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Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic:
done muhahaha
Kaseki-
Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 4902
Sacred Shards : ∞
Class : Ω
Level : ∞
Experience : ∞
Character Sheet
Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle
NightMare wrote:Name: Shadow Dragon Slayer
Type: Shadow/Darkness
Usage: Conjuration?
Description:
This type of magic not only allows user to fully utilize Dragon Slayer magic but also fully be in control of the user's shadow as well as user's enemies later on. This magic isn't all about brute force, destroying, but it is also about messing people's mind with shadow, so bit of supportive like magic.Abilities:
Dark World: The user gains 7 MP per post while when posting in the shadows/darkness.
World of Shadow: The user gains more magic power when fighting against Shadow/darkness based users.
- MP chart:
D=10%
C=15%
B=20%
A=25%
S=30%
H=40%
X=50%
?=65%
Gluttony: The user is able to eat shadow/darkness. This also allows the user to be not hungry.
- Spells:
Name: Shadow Monster
Rank: D
Description:
- Shadow Monster:
The user release his shadow and having it actually come up from the ground or off the ground. The shadow soon changes its form to a hideous monster and starts doing physical damages. The shadow can reach up to 10 meters in range.
Strengths:
1. The shadow is able to do brute physical damage. However, when used in the shadows/darkness, the monster does C rank damage. When used against Light characters it does C rank damage. You are not going to get a boost just off having it in darkness. You get the MP boost already
2. The user can have multiple forms of shadows of monsters at once, putting a fear on people's mind (At this rank only against one player) for total of 2 posts. Remove parenthesis
- Multiple shadows of monsters at once:
Weaknesses:
1. The forms of shadows are only for cosmetic purpose only. Meaning, the user can create 50ft tall enormous monster, or 10ft. tall shadow monster, the effect of it is all the same. .. The damage is still the same
2. The shadow can be over powered by higher rank of Darkness Magic. .. or light.
3. Player who are higher rank, will not suffer from the fear.
Duration: 2 posts.
Cooldown: 3 posts. Increase to 4 posts... surprised I didn't notice earlier.
See... Now you made me use the quote button...
Edits are in various colors~
NightMare-
Lineage : Legend's Trio, Phoenix Fire
Position : None
Origin : De Fiore
Posts : 16
Sacred Shards : 11
Class : F
Level : 1
Experience : 0
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Character Name:
Alignment: Neutral
Primary Magic:
bump. fixed it to what u have said :D
Kaseki-
Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
Position : None
Origin : Pandora
Posts : 4902
Sacred Shards : ∞
Class : Ω
Level : ∞
Experience : ∞
Character Sheet
Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle
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