weapon and item bundle

Shinrin fukku:

Shizen anpu:

cloak:

Fukurō no zūmu:

Skullnight wrote:Name: Shinrin fukku
Type: weapon
Rank: weak
Description:

Shinrin fukku:

Length: the blade is 1.5ft long
Weight: it weighs 1.5 kgs
Strengths:
-because of it being fixed the the arm it allows for a stronger thrust meaning easy to pierce flesh What is the damage it does? What class?
- easily hidden
Weaknesses:
- will break after 2 hits from a strong weapon and 1 hit from any weapon above that How many weak weapon hits?
-does not allow for big motion as it is strapped to the users arm
-leaves the user open to shorter weapons such as daggers.

Name: Shizen anpu
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

Shizen anpu:

Strengths:
- amplifies the users lineage ability to hear nature How far? Distance.
- enables easier communication with plants
Weaknesses:
- has only a small radius What is the radius? This is also much like the strength above, please fix this.
- can only be used during a clear night
- won't work during a storm

Name: Kamereon
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

cloak:

Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
- allows the user to blend in with the forest rendering them almost undetectable It's a weak item, you will not be undetectable at this rank.
- 10% resistance against magical attacks of the nature element
Weaknesses:  
- can't blend in with suburban backgrounds
- doesn't work in the rain
- only works if remaining stationary while in use

Name: Fukurō no zūmu
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

Fukurō no zūmu:

Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
- triples the distance in which the user can see
- slows movement down by 1/3
Weaknesses:
- useless against a stationary opponent
- can only be used at night
- won't work in pitch black

Skullnight wrote:Name: Shinrin fukku
Type: weapon
Rank: weak
Description:

Shinrin fukku:

Length: the blade is 1.5ft long
Weight: it weighs 1.5 kgs
Strengths:
-because of it being fixed the the arm it allows for a stronger thrust meaning easy to pierce flesh
- this sword does d class damage to an unarmed opponent but f class to an armed one
Weaknesses:
- Can take 4 weak weapon hits before breaking. will break after 2 hits from a strong weapon and 1 hit from any weapon above that
-does not allow for big motion as it is strapped to the users arm
-leaves the user open to shorter weapons such as daggers.

Name: Shizen anpu
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

Shizen anpu:

Strengths:
- amplifies the users lineage ability to hear nature at a radius of 12 meters
- enables easier communication with plants
Weaknesses:
- has only a small radius of 12 meters
- can only be used during a clear night <<<<<<
- won't work during a storm <<<<<<<<< These are basically the same thing, change this.

Name: Kamereon
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

cloak:

Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
- allows the user to blend in with the forest Please elaborate
- 10% resistance against magical attacks of the nature element
Weaknesses:  
- can't blend in with suburban backgrounds Elaborate... Why doesn't it work?
- doesn't work in the rain
- only works if remaining stationary while in use

Name: Fukurō no zūmu
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

Fukurō no zūmu:

Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
- triples the distance in which the user can see What is that distance?
- slows movement down by 1/3 What is the base movement
Weaknesses:
- useless against a stationary opponent
- can only be used at night
- won't work in pitch black

Skullnight wrote:Name: Shinrin fukku
Type: weapon
Rank: weak
Description:

Shinrin fukku:

Length: the blade is 1.5ft long
Weight: it weighs 1.5 kgs
Strengths:
-because of it being fixed the the arm it allows for a stronger thrust meaning easy to pierce flesh
- this sword does d class damage to an unarmed opponent but f class to an armed one Don't you mean ARMORED?
Weaknesses:
- Can take 4 weak weapon hits before breaking. will break after 2 hits from a strong weapon and 1 hit from any weapon above that
-does not allow for big motion as it is strapped to the users arm
-leaves the user open to shorter weapons such as daggers.

Name: Shizen anpu
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

Shizen anpu:

Strengths:
- amplifies the users lineage ability to hear nature at a radius of 12 meters
- enables easier communication with plants
Weaknesses:
- has only a small radius of 12 meters You already said this.
- can only be used during a clear night
- will only work in complete silence meaning any sound interference will cause the headphones to shut down.

Name: Kamereon
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

cloak:

Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
- allows the user to blend in with the surrounding forest like camouflage that will make the user hard to locate from a distance of 5-10 meters. Can you reword this? like "Blends in with Nature: Difficult to see in forest (5-10 Meters)" or some thing?
- 10% resistance against magical attacks of the nature element Change this to 3%
Weaknesses:  
- can't blend in with suburban backgrounds as suburban backgrounds are a constantly shifting color and way to solid the user would be noticed almost instantly.
- doesn't work in the rain
- only works if remaining stationary while in use

Name: Fukurō no zūmu
Type: Enchanted Item
Rank: weak
Description:

Fukurō no zūmu:

Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
- triples the distance in which the user can see (say you can see only 10 meters ahead these goggles allow you to see 30 meters instead of only 10) How far do YOU see? This is the base.
- slows opponents movement down by 1/3 ( say the base movement is 5mph, these goggles will slow the movement down to 1mph) .. This is a miscalculation... Even so, it's only through the goggles, not real time... if this was the case, this is a SACRED item ,hich you do not have.
Weaknesses:
- useless against a stationary opponent
- can only be used at night
- won't work in pitch black