magic

by **Kodai** Sat Mar 24, 2018 12:58 am

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Post n°1

magic

Post by Kodai Sat Mar 24, 2018 12:58 am

three things

fix bullet points so they are on a different line

also a link to your magic please.

All spells have a standard cost, that is listed.

by **Kodai** Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:00 am

Kodai

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Post n°2

Re: magic

Post by Kodai Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:00 am

Another thing:

Only D-ranks go on this sheet, each rank is its own sheet.

by **Don Quixote** Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:33 am

Don Quixote

Don Quixote: Lineage : The Forgesmith
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Character Sheet
Character Name: Nanashi
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Primary Magic: Gobijigan (Spatial Magic)

Post n°3

Re: magic

Post by Don Quixote Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:33 am

All done~

Format is fine now I think. Let me know what you think of the spells individually now. Not entirely sure on some of the mechanics sooooo

by **Shini Chikai** Sat Mar 24, 2018 3:08 am

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Character Sheet
Character Name: Shini Chikai
Alignment: Lawful Good
Primary Magic: Jutsu

Post n°4

Re: magic

Post by Shini Chikai Sat Mar 24, 2018 3:08 am

I didn't mean you actually had to link in the app, I just meant so I can use as reference lol. In a comment was fine.

Name: Gobijigan: Recall
Rank: D
Cost: 10 MP
Magic: Gobijigan
Element: Chaos
Description: Using Nanashi's magic he is able to open a small access port to his dimension with which he can place weapons back inside after he's used them.
Strengths: - Can put a weak weapon inside of his dimension for safe keeping.
- Saves him the trouble of continuing to carry items that he's summoned on the battlefield.
Weaknesses: - Must be holding the weapon in his hand in order to recall it back to his dimension
- Cannot summon back the weapon this spell is used with unless the cooldown for this spell has passed.
- Only weak weapons can be recalled with this spell
- For Ranged Weapons this does not refill ammunition in any way shape or form
- Cannot put others weapons inside this dimension unless the user has taken them from the target.
- Cannot keep any enemy weapons that are placed in the dimension after the thread is over.
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts

Name: Gobijigan: Recall
Rank: D
Cost: 10 MP
Magic: Gobijigan
Element: Chaos
Description: Using Nanashi's magic he is able to open a small access port to his dimension with which he can place weapons back inside after he's used them.
Strengths:
- Can put a weak weapon inside of his dimension for safe keeping.
- Saves him the trouble of continuing to carry items that he's summoned on the battlefield.
Weaknesses:
- Must be holding the weapon in his hand in order to recall it back to his dimension
- Cannot summon back the weapon this spell is used with unless the cooldown for this spell has passed.
- Only weak weapons can be recalled with this spell
- For Ranged Weapons this does not refill ammunition in any way shape or form
- Cannot put others weapons inside this dimension unless the user has taken them from the target.
- Cannot keep any enemy weapons that are placed in the dimension after the thread is over.
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Posts

What I mentioned before ^

Shadow Slash can only be one variant, either a slash or a projectile. Variant means varied sizes, which is not allowed.

Do this ,and you're good to go ;3

by **Don Quixote** Sat Mar 24, 2018 10:08 pm

Don Quixote

Don Quixote: Lineage : The Forgesmith
Position : None
Origin : De Fiore
Posts : 607
Sacred Shards : 12
Class : C
Level : 50
Experience : 7500

Character Sheet
Character Name: Nanashi
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Primary Magic: Gobijigan (Spatial Magic)