Alright, for this match I will give you some head pointers to help you in future battles. Remember this is only ADVICE and you should not feel bad to make mistakes or to be corrected. This spar is totally to make mistakes on! Let's kick things off...
Noire said before putting the claws in the dirt, having it collect a lot of dirt before slicing upwards, making a few bits of dirt go into Toriel's eyes before attacking Toriel with the claws twice with each claw before jumping back a few meters to prevent a counter.
So here, this is just a matter of wording. When you say
"...making a few bits of dirt go into Toriel's eyes..." This can be seen as godmodding, since you are forcefully making them go into my eyes. This would leave me with no option to avoid it because you have already made them go into my eyes. The quick fix to this would be
"...making a few bits of dirt go towards Toriel's eyes..." See how this now gives the other a chance to react? This is an easy fix that allows you to do the action and avoid be called out on godmodding.
before attacking Toriel with the claws twice with each claw before jumping back a few meters to prevent a counter.
In combat, the more specific you are, the less of a chance your enemy can use your post against you. For example, if you just
attack me, you never said how. Did you slash overhead? Underhand? Left? Right? Stab at me? I can take your post and say "Well, since you didn't specify I assume you tried to stab me" and then reap havoc upon that. The fix would be specifically saying how exactly you attack here, down to which arm does it. Example maybe would be: "Noire attacks Toriel with both claws, swiping her right claw in a horizontal motion while the left claw came in for an overhead strike".
before jumping back a few meters to prevent a counter."
So in response to the one above this, let's say I executed an attack that would have hit you. Let's hypothetically say your attack failed and I punched you. This would mean, despite me punching you, you'd still retreat backwards. See how this can be a drawback? You can't edit your actions, so you would be punched and flee back, when you could have possibly been punched and struck back.