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    Elemental Golem Creation

    Lilinette Q. Mido
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    Character Name: Lilinette Q. Mido
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    Primary Magic: Elemental golem creation

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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Sun Nov 09, 2014 5:00 pm

    Name: Elemental Golem Creation
    Type: Varies depending on Golem Made
    Usage: Creation
    Description: Elemental Golem Creation is a form of Alchemy, which although a person can be born with the ability to use such alchemy, it must also be studied. Lilinette discovered she was born with the ability to use such a powerful form of alchemy when she was 13 years old, and she was left in an ally to die. It was then that the Golem creation magic within her would not allow her to die, and fused her body with the shadows. Allowing her to not only use her alchemy, but also allow her to live. Forever. 

    Elemental Golem creation allows the user, in this case Lilinette, to fuse animals, such as cats, dogs, people, with an element of their choice. The golem is then partially that element, and can bend that element to the best of their abilities.  This golem is also bound to its creator, meaning that it must always obey their rules. Once made, a golem remains inactive in a location chosen by their master. Once the master needs them, the golem will activate and spontaneously appear in front of their master, ready to do as they are told. The golems, however, can be killed. Once killed, the user has to create a new one to take its place.
    Abilities:
    - Golem Combustion: Golem Combustion is considered the taboo of Golem creation alchemy.  when needed, the user can destroy their golem, no matter the element, into a nonelemental explosion causing damage equal to the rank of the golem destroyed, and in the range allowed for the golems rank. Of course, this completely destroys the golem, not allowing for it to be used again. This is often used as a last resort, distracting the opponent so the master can escape. The user must sacrifice magic equal to half the mana cost of the golem in order to activate this ability.

    Spells:
    D-rank Golems:

    C-rank Golems:


    Last edited by Lilinette Q. Mido on Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:36 pm; edited 22 times in total
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 1:41 pm

    Before I continue... This magic is FULL of information. It's rather... well, for lack of a better word, overwhelming to grade. So, bear with me on my edits... as I'm trying to look at every single part at once.

    Lilinette Q. Mido wrote:Name: Elemental Golem Creation
    Type: Varies depending on Golem Made
    Usage: Creation
    Description: Elemental Golem Creation is a form of Alchemy, which although a person can be born with the ability to use such alchemy, it must also be studied. Lilinette discovered she was born with the ability to use such a powerful form of alchemy when she was 13 years old, and she was left in an ally to die. It was then that the Golem creation magic within her would not allow her to die, and fused her body with the shadows. Allowing her to not only use her alchemy, but also allow her to live. Forever.

    Elemental Golem creation allows the user, in this case Lilinette, to fuse animals, such as cats, dogs, people, with an element of their choice. The golem is then partially that element, and can bend that element to the best of their abilities.  This golem is also bound to its creator, meaning that it must always obey their rules. The golems, however, can be killed. Once killed, the user has to create a new one to take its place.
    Abilities:
    - Eternal Life: Due to Lilinettes body sustaining off of alchemy, she can not age, and can not die naturally. She can die by unnatural means of course, such as being stabbed through the heart, decapitation, ect. After some thought... This is going to be removed from your magic.
    - Golem Transportation: Once main, a golem remains inactive in a location chosen by their master. Once the master needs them, the golem will activate and spontaneously appear in front of their master, ready to do as they are told. This will need to be removed from abilities as well.
    - Golem Combustion: Golem Combustion is considered the taboo of Golem creation alchemy.  when needed, the user can destroy their golem, no matter the element, into a nonelemental explosion causing damage equal to the rank of the golem destroyed, and in the range allowed for the golems rank. Of course, this completely destroys the golem, not allowing for it to be used again. This is often used as a last resort, distracting the opponent so the master can escape. The user must sacrifice magic equal to half the mana cost of the golem in order to activate this ability.
    - Golem Sight: Lilinette can link with her golems, seeing and hearing anything they can see or hear no matter how far away they are, and still retain the ability to see through her own eyes as well.
    - MultiSummon: Lilinette can summon 2 golems at once. This too, will be removed.

    Now, before you panic, let me explain.
    What is highlighted in blue, will be removed completely from this magic. This will be instead added into your character app. These are things that barely pertain to your magic, and shouldn't be here. This will free up some ability slots, allowing you to do some more things with your golems. What is highlighted in green will be removed and added into your Spell information. In simple sense, your golems... I'm going to treat like Celestial Spirits, ReEquip Weapons, and Pokemon. As they are all summoned from "another dimension", are equiped with assorted weapons, and have a mind of their own.. to an extent.

    NOTE: MultiSummon: I want you to make a chart, on how many golems you can control at each class. EX:

    Class F: 1 Golems
    Class D: 1 Golems
    Class C: 2 Golems
    Class B: 2 Golems..

    And so on. This, I will add to your character personally.


    Spells:
    D-rank Golems:

    C-rank Golems:

    Edits are in colors.

    I only got up to the first 2 golems. That should be enough for right now.
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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:12 pm

    bump :) ready for further instruction :)
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:17 pm

    Rebump,

    I posted the edits on the first two golems. You need to edit those. Then I will continue.
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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:20 pm

    edits made. (it is supposed to be Frost Bod)
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:08 pm

    Hiro - No range with the fire. Enchanting his weapons to do that much damage is already a lot.

    Khione - range of 3m with her hair. Even though it can be cut, being ice and crystals... and being able to retract, er... whip it back, allows a lot of fancy cool things.

    Rokku - "Shadows Reload- Rokku's guns never run out of bullets, for they are constantly being refilled by shadows. These bullets travel up to 25 meters per second, and up to 60 meters away. " Change it to 30m. It has unlimited ammo. This is a spell.. or at least it should be. Or you can turn it into a weapon for other reasons...

    Leena : "Ability: Lightnings Fists of Fury: Each physical hit she lands causes a C-ranked shock of electricity through the target. Once per post, she can even shoot out blasts of C-rank lightning towards her target. These blases are 3 feet in diameter, fly at speed of up to 35 mps, and fly up to 20 meters away. " This is two abilities. Lower the damage to D-rank (As you can punch many times in a post... striking as fast as... whatever. You could say that with each punch is emits a bolt of electricity. Like you did with Hiro... do something about this.

    After this... it should be good.

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    Alignment: Neutral
    Primary Magic: Elemental golem creation

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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:17 pm

    edited sir! you are the bestest.
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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:27 pm

    - Golem Sight: Lilinette can link with her golems, seeing and hearing anything they can see or hear no matter how far away they are, and still retain the ability to see through her own eyes as well.

    Remove this, and you'll be good to go.

    Reason: This is the Rinnegan.

    NOPENOPENOPE.
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    Primary Magic: Elemental golem creation

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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:36 pm

    edited.
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